Please review my landing page

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by nuruddeen710, Jul 23, 2008.

  1. #1
    Im so happy now. It is the first time i get sale for two days in a row... usually it's 1 sale per 5-7 days :D. It might not be much for some of you guys but i find it as a good motivation in my clickbank journey. Best of all the traffic i get for the sales are free.

    Im ready to promote other products to versify my income sources and i've just completed my site http://www.surveyexposed.com. How do you guys think about the landing page and the writing? Also please give me advice on the grammar and punctuation because english is not my first language.

    Thanks a lot!
     
    nuruddeen710, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  2. Cary Bergeron

    Cary Bergeron Well-Known Member

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    looks nice and clean, good job
     
    Cary Bergeron, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  3. getjimmy

    getjimmy Prominent Member

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    Nice landing page.How r u promoting it?
     
    getjimmy, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  4. just_life

    just_life Peon

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    A very nice landing page. The competition on adwords is tight.

    I remember my first foray into IM was with trying to create a survey site. spent about a month on it and gave it up. I think I still have the book which I created with all the survey links in it. Come to think of it, maybe I can give it away as a bonus from one of my sites.
     
    just_life, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  5. bl4ckmaN^

    bl4ckmaN^ Well-Known Member

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    Yeah, looks decent.

    The only thing you could correct is the images. They look a bit messy.
     
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    Good site just check your spelling though....
     
    DSAMMON, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  7. nuruddeen710

    nuruddeen710 Peon

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    Thanks everybody. I'll try to improve it.
     
    nuruddeen710, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  8. blaine78

    blaine78 Active Member

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    #8
    I only have two words for your landing page... neat and nice!

    Great work!
     
    blaine78, Jul 23, 2008 IP
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    S_Tirmizi Banned

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    my two words for your landing page would be short & simple ... done good job with it ... and congrates on getting more sales ... keep it up ;)
     
    S_Tirmizi, Jul 25, 2008 IP
  10. argothiusz

    argothiusz Well-Known Member

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    Great landing page even though you modified it from an original credit card landing page. xD
    Would be nice to share with us some tips for promoting :)
     
    argothiusz, Jul 25, 2008 IP