Please Review My Landing Page

I'll just go ahead and share my landing page, it's not like you'v never saw this niche before , it's Clickbank's Number 1

http://www.CarDriveBy.com


What do you think? should i add more reviews,? change the font, maby add more content.


Thanks.

Izzy

 

Nice landing page, but I hope you like lots of competition because your not the only one, obviously, marketing this variation of products. Best of luck!

 

very beautiful design, maybe more pages, interactivity, and a little more marketing in it.

 

To be frank, its not cool.

 

Nice design indeed!

 

nice adaptation of the joomla template catalyst.

 

Great designing, and a PR 1 already! Good job.

 

I like it, it's better than some of the pages I have seen.

 

thanks guys hope it will convert well.

 

man....this is a hell out of a landing page...Congrats.

 

Pretty slick.

 

any negitive points that my not convert ?

 

you may want to put the $ sign at the beginning of the price eg $97.00. Just my 2 cents otherwise very nice design!

 

looks pretty good to me, should convert well.

 

When you link to the checkout part... is it carrying over the correct merchant affiliate id for each of them?

 

Every thing is good. But Aspect of preselling is bad. I will suggest you to remove order now link and create a read more link. This will open the buyer inside the visitor. I had used this methods and surprisingly my CTR and Conversion ration has been soar.

Best Luck!

 

that's really nice landing page.

 

I love the design. However all the text seems to just flow into each other.

 

The overall design is great it looks good,

you may want to consider changing the visit website link to read some thing like "learn more" That way they will be less likely to think you are an affiliate.

I would also add a little longer review of Runyourcarwithwater.com

Other than that your site looks great, nice work

 

Should 'dobule' be spelled 'double' in the header?

Otherwise, great design - I'm impressed.