Please review my Landing Page

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    mercuryyy, Jun 2, 2008 IP
  2. jhon99

    jhon99 Banned

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    #2
    Simple site i think. I like it :)
     
    jhon99, Jun 2, 2008 IP
  3. mercuryyy

    mercuryyy Well-Known Member

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    Thanks. any thing i should improve, add?
     
    mercuryyy, Jun 2, 2008 IP
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    thats quite inspiring, looks good, well laid out and interesting to read.
    I dont like that red car tho, you need to stick with cartoon theme but not too childish.
     
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  5. mercuryyy

    mercuryyy Well-Known Member

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    Do you think i should a more content?
     
    mercuryyy, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    Content is enough ... but change the font type... then it ll b more attractive
     
    anoopkmr, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    #7
    Add somethings like water symbol to the banner. by the way i like your web,it looks nice.
     
    P.Udomdech, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    ya ya Simple site
     
    shaketibla, Jun 3, 2008 IP