As we have received lots of controvertial responses about the mixing hen parties and children parties, we have decided to separate them using simple landing pages. Here is one: http://go-crazy.co.uk/spy-birhday-london.html Please take a look does it look professional enough and would you buy from it? Texts are fixed by one native UK speakers.
Very well designed. It is clean, simple and looks professional in my opinion. I also think that the fonts are perfect since it is meant for kids birthday parties it kind of fits the theme. Maybe an idea would be to put the video on auto play and at the top of the landing page so it is the first thing they see.
Sorry, but i will disagree regarding the auto play. The main customer is a mum, therefore unexpected sound may annoy her ans we will lose the possible sale.
It's a very good and decent site... The idea is great too. But try to explain more about the spy kits, you are going to demonstrate about. That will make the parents to go for it. All the best