Please review my landing page!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Make a perfect site, Oct 24, 2011.

  1. #1
    Hi all,

    I have just created a landing page to cover my new, pioneer startup. It is here: http://www.chilledlime.com

    What do you think of it? Any comments, questions, bugs and critics are welcome :)

    Oh yes, if you find a little bug, please report it here and also write down the browser you are using.

    Thanks very much!!

    Have a nice day!
    Regards,
    Akos
     
    Make a perfect site, Oct 24, 2011 IP
  2. MBCarterBooks

    MBCarterBooks Peon

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    #2
    not bad...page is fine for what it is. concept is interesting too..good luck
     
    MBCarterBooks, Oct 24, 2011 IP
  3. euroforum

    euroforum Peon

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    #3
    who this site is dedicated to? What will be the topics?
     
    euroforum, Oct 24, 2011 IP
  4. seo1988

    seo1988 Greenhorn

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    #4
    Concept is also interesting for me, but landing page is good :)
     
    seo1988, Oct 25, 2011 IP
  5. hashif

    hashif Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Good design i liked your Logo very much which looks great with two different colors also concept is very good..Best wishes..:)
     
    hashif, Oct 25, 2011 IP
  6. Make a perfect site

    Make a perfect site Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Thanks very much :) Well, the little story about the concept:

    ChilledLime was originally a summer project. But when we got a lot of positive feedback from family and friends, we decided to make it big...
    This debating concept came when I was just in an fun argument with a friend. We were debating on this topic: "xbox vs. wii". He said xbox, I said wii :)
    A day after I was looking at a startups blog (a site about startups). There were startups that gave new iPhone apps, youtube converters and all kinds of stuff. But not a debating site. Then these two days joined in my head ->>> ChilledLime :)

    Anyway, thanks again!


    There will be a variety of topics on the site, because the whole content (topics) is user generated. This means we don't write the content, the users create it :)
    Thanks for this good question.
     
    Make a perfect site, Oct 27, 2011 IP
  7. Sunsign SEO Services

    Sunsign SEO Services Member

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    #7
    Nice Page you have done. now just target the keywords according to the pages. I will report the bug if i got.
     
    Sunsign SEO Services, Oct 28, 2011 IP
  8. Cultivar

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    #8
    way to busy and repetitive.starting from the top we know it is online so just say:
    Debating Made Easy. (in the same font as the - join the Beta invite list) - lose the italics.

    The place to come (not go) to debate, argue or agree on all manner of chat.

    I see no added value in the line 'Join the Beta invite list.'

    don't say 'do you want to get early access ...' say ' Sign up now for early access'

    hope that helps...
     
    Cultivar, Oct 28, 2011 IP
  9. zenid

    zenid Peon

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    #9
    Not much to say about your site yet unfortunately, but I like your site's fresh concept and its fresh name. I just love lime too much ;) I'll keep an eye out for your site's launch!
     
    zenid, Oct 28, 2011 IP
  10. Make a perfect site

    Make a perfect site Well-Known Member

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    Thanks very much ;) I thought about the name a lot.
     
    Make a perfect site, Oct 28, 2011 IP
  11. dumindushalika

    dumindushalika Notable Member

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    #11
    Logo is simple, But PERFECT.:rolleyes: Can you make a logo for me too? ;) And yes.. Good landing page. The only missed thing is a favicon. Hope you will add a favicon.
    As your name in DP forum, hope you will "make a perfect site". :D
     
    dumindushalika, Oct 29, 2011 IP
  12. Make a perfect site

    Make a perfect site Well-Known Member

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    #12
    :) Thanks very very much for these kind words! I will add a favicon. Also I will send you a PM in a few days... ;)
     
    Make a perfect site, Oct 29, 2011 IP
  13. n4bi1

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    #13
    looks nice , good work
     
    n4bi1, Oct 29, 2011 IP
  14. Codythebest

    Codythebest Notable Member

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    #14
    I got there and all I can see is I have to put my email, which I'm not going to do because I think I'll be spammed. So then, I have no clue what this site is all about...
    Now you have a general opinion of people out there...
     
    Codythebest, Oct 29, 2011 IP