Please review my landing page

Discussion in 'Websites' started by frenchmen77, Oct 31, 2006.

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    First one I've ever made, so please, tell me what I've done wrong :)

    http://www.krazframe.com/land

    obviously I'll need to tuch some things up, and move it to its own domain ;)
     
    frenchmen77, Oct 31, 2006 IP
  2. keith212

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    #2
    Nice parking page
    Good link structure
     
    keith212, Feb 23, 2007 IP
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    #3
    For the landing page, I would remove the border around your adsense ads so they're better blended and I would also add more text to the page.. (it's against TOS to have a page with only ads in it)
     
    8everything, Feb 23, 2007 IP