Please review my landing page

Please review my landing page, and let me know if you understand the wording or think it will work?
Your advise is appreciated. Check the site out at: http://runningfaster.net/

 

The bright red background is a little too distracting.

There is a ton of text on the page and I think it could be broken up a bit better. Try adding color to the headings, bullet points, etc. something to help break up the huge chunks of text and make the key points easier to find if someone is just scanning the page.

 

Thanks for your feedback, but do you think it it written in proper english? Does it attract you to buy the book If you wanted it?

 

nice content, but the red lines are a bit unappealing to the eye. maybe try something a bit more basic.

 

its simple and nice
good to look that its not having a lengthy page

 

The red background is a bit overpowering, IMO.

 

I will be straight to the point as I am a fitness enthusiast myself. Where are your videos? Teasers? Something that tells me you have information I don't already know?

You need to boast excusive tips/tricks that you cannot find on hundreds of internet forums nowadays.

On the design, like others have said the red is very overpowering.

Hope this helps.

 

to many blocks of words make my brain go crazy

 

I agree with everyone else about the design (power down the color a little), but might I also suggest that if this is the first place your potential customer land, that you take a sample chapter, or write a quick (few pages) to give away free to entice people to buy.

In other words, wherever you're advertising, don't sell - instead offer a free report (or a free sample chapter), capture their name and email address via a squeeze page first, then you can send it to them, and follow up via your autoresponder and even offer them more free tips, which will:

1. build a relationship with them
2. it will help them know that they can trust you, as you've already given them something of real value for free
3. people don't buy on the fist shot, so you can continue to follow up with them over time
4. your building a list (which is a serious asset)
5. you may come across other products (yours or affiliate) that you might offer them down the road

Good luck,
Jennifer Nowland
"The Free Tip Marketer"

 

Thanks for your oppinions its good advice

 

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So No Review.

 

I think Killer mule i right "to many blocks of words make my brain go crazy " I think the english needs to changed.
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What should we review?

 

I cant see anything

 

Well, this idea can work, just improve it and add more useful information. keep mooving

 

I just took a look and the pictures look great, the text/copy seems pretty small and overall I'd be unsure what exactly the site wanted me to do...

Hope that helps.

 

The content is very specialized and most part does not exit anywhere else...how would you better it?