Can somebody help me make my landing page better? (check my signature) Any tips are more than welcome Thank you, Eddy
You need to add a little flavor to your landing page. Keep in mind when someone first clicks your link, you have 5 seconds to catch their attention. You want to have a box where its bright in color to bring their attention to the top of the page. In that box there should be a 'short' but detailed message on exactly what you're selling. Just try to make it catchy sales pitch.
Hi Its abit plain, put a blogroll or something on there and exchange a few links with others on here. Also search for some SEO plugins that will help promote your site. Back to your layout - its clean and easy to understand, put some affiliate links or adsense on there. Most landing pages have adsense or some kind of external advertising. Ill link up to you if you want - PM me your linkage.
I thinks its great with use of good font types and colours. Thats first impressions anyway. As well as getting it reviewed, best if u test it - that will be the best feedback u will get from the right persons also.
I think he switched from his original landing page to the sales page. Mainly, I'm just trying to say that I'm pretty sure that's not his landing page and this topic is moot now.
Actually I like it a lot. Maybe on the right side where the facts are you can use other color or bold letters to emphasize specific numbers or crucial words. The video is amazing. I am also interested if you can share where did you create this video. Hope your business starts good...