Please Review My Landing Page

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    dely^gun, Mar 5, 2009 IP
  2. DIYDomain

    DIYDomain Peon

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    First impressions may sound harsh. Colors & Layout OK BUT... English Grammar is incorrect, makes a very bad impression considering it is site that advertises learning a language! The introduction has a rather amateur HTML feel about it. The recommendations that follow look way better than the intro.
     
    DIYDomain, Mar 5, 2009 IP
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    It a cartoon stylish . I suggest the header should not be so high .
     
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    I like your template and layout looks nice. I think the title itself has the grammar mistakes, check it.
     
    2advance, Mar 5, 2009 IP