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Discussion in 'Reviews' started by math20, Aug 5, 2006.

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    math20, Aug 5, 2006 IP
  2. Ganceann

    Ganceann Peon

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    #2
    It looked fine to me. Simple colours and clear display.

    It will likely depend if you plan on adding much other stuff to the page whether it will stay simple or become cluttered looking.
     
    Ganceann, Aug 6, 2006 IP
  3. NoobieDoobieDo

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    #3
    looks good.

    i'd suggest 1 graphic symbolizing a file being destroyed
     
    NoobieDoobieDo, Aug 6, 2006 IP
  4. KlaxoN

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    #4
    I like this page. Very clean and good colors.
    My advices:
    ~ Do biger bottom margin.
    ~ U can add some small graphic in the text.
    ~ Maybe add colors from the logo to all expression "File Destroyer" at the text. It will look interesting. :) ;)
     
    KlaxoN, Aug 7, 2006 IP
  5. shamess

    shamess Well-Known Member

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    I'd avoid using text highlighting. Maybe it's just me, but it makes me think of cheesey adverts and crappy affiliate sites - not a good look.
     
    shamess, Aug 7, 2006 IP
  6. NAZAM.COM

    NAZAM.COM Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Another link to Paypal at the bottom of the page as well. Also would be nice to have some screenshots.
     
    NAZAM.COM, Aug 7, 2006 IP
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    #7
    use some different font for text rest seemed to be ok
     
    forumrating, Aug 7, 2006 IP
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    #8
    I think that landing page could be more expressive.
     
    begemot, Aug 7, 2006 IP
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    #9
    You should add a screenshot of the product somewhere on the page.
     
    droopy420, Aug 9, 2006 IP
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    I agree remove the highlighting and you have a simple good looking page with nice base colours
     
    ds_252, Aug 11, 2006 IP
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    Add some images and product screenshots.
     
    routed11, Aug 11, 2006 IP