Please review my landing page

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  2. SpectR

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    Looks a bit spammy to me.
    Too big and varigated fonts make bad impression in my opinion.
    You could make a better header as well.
     
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  3. Jingletruck

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    better header, neater and smaller font, this looks like one of those sites which screams scam
     
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    #4
    Make some nice contents.
     
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    need to change the design also need gud header. Font need little small and must hide the affiliate link there.
     
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    Well looks like a typical sales page to me and after reading it, I think it should be convincing enough. Overall, I think it's ok.
     
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    It looks a little cheap and a little spammy like SpectR said.
     
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  8. john14789

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    It would be nice to just get some recommendations on how to improve the site instead of getting the same responses.

    Any tips on how to improve the headers?

    I'll improve the fonts.
     
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  9. john14789

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    Anybody have any other suggestions?
     
    john14789, Nov 2, 2008 IP
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    Seems very unorganized to me. I don't see any reason for those banners to be there, the entire landing page is a huge banner
     
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  11. john14789

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    So where do you propose I put my banners then?

    Should I replace the top left side banner with a picture?
     
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    yes i agree i would make it look more professional then it does right now. You will get more members to join and trust your site and that is what it is for to make you some money and people to use.
     
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  13. john14789

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    How can I make it more professional?

    Any ideas you would like to share with me. :)

    I'm sorry but I'm all out of creative ideas because of all the work I've been doing.
     
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    Make the fonts small. Because it is too big even at large resolution. Think about and test it at 800 X 600. The whole screen will be taken by the header only. On the other hand, large fonts take all the attention and visitors do not read the contents properly.

    It also looks like a spam site.
     
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    I think the big fonts work well :)

    Only thing I think needs improving is a) header/logo and b) make all the content into 1 column.
     
    redbean, Nov 3, 2008 IP
  16. john14789

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    I'll try smaller fonts for a week and see results. Ok so now that we have the font matter settled how do you guys suggest I improve the header? Should I pay someone to make a header?

    I saw a bunch of people here who make headers. Can someone suggest me a good header designer.
     
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    It also looks a bit spammy to me. I think it needs a nice header and a more attractive layout.
     
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    Ok I just got done making improvements! Please check it out now and tell me if I need to improve anything else.
     
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    Anybody like or dislike the new improvements? :)
     
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  20. silentmano

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    #20
    i agree with the posts up their but needs a better header
     
    silentmano, Nov 4, 2008 IP