Please Review My Landing Page

Discussion in 'Google AdWords' started by wwwbug, Oct 15, 2008.

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How do you feel my landing page?

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  2. Poor

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  3. Can't express clearly

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  1. wwwbug

    wwwbug Peon

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    #21
    TheRazor5! Thanks a lot ,we will try it!
     
    wwwbug, Oct 19, 2008 IP
  2. Rockstar82

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    #22
    Again, there is too much going on on the page. Try to elliminate at least half of all the graphics... its a good LP but it just seams that every idea that you guys had was implemented while a simpler design always works better.
     
    Rockstar82, Oct 21, 2008 IP
  3. comtec

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    #23
    I think it is nice and clean page - Makes me want to buy!
     
    comtec, Oct 21, 2008 IP
  4. panya7

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    #24
    It's Nice. I think you should specify Landing Page.
     
    panya7, Oct 21, 2008 IP
  5. baagish

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    #25
    Nice look, easy navigation and informative it will really provide you good ROI.
     
    baagish, Oct 22, 2008 IP
  6. MobileFun4U

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    #26
    I think the logo could be better, now it looks kinda cheap. Other than that the description is clear and the download button is nice and prominent.
     
    MobileFun4U, Oct 22, 2008 IP
  7. wwwbug

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    #27
    Thanks! Get it for free, if you like it!
     
    wwwbug, Oct 22, 2008 IP
  8. wwwbug

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    #28
    wwwbug, Oct 22, 2008 IP
  9. www.WEBSLICERS.com

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    #29
    it's a nice site. clean and straight to the point. i think i'm gonna download it later. :rolleyes:
     
    www.WEBSLICERS.com, Oct 22, 2008 IP
  10. wwwbug

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    #30
    A well-designed website need images. It is not a problem to use images, if your web hosting runs fast enough.And loading speed is very important for a landing page, google like the fast pages
     
    wwwbug, Oct 22, 2008 IP
  11. bluescharp

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    #31
    if you remove image border,it will be better
    :)
     
    bluescharp, Oct 26, 2008 IP
  12. pawanpandey78

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    #32
    Hi,

    I also like your landing page design and structure.
     
    pawanpandey78, Oct 26, 2008 IP
  13. drvenom

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    #33
    Very decent.. 100% marketable..
     
    drvenom, Oct 26, 2008 IP
  14. jenniferedwards

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    #34
    Hmmm. Indeed its a nice landing page
     
    jenniferedwards, Oct 27, 2008 IP
  15. icpathi

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    #35
    The landing page is good.
     
    icpathi, Oct 27, 2008 IP
  16. patrickberry

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    #36
    looks correct,

    as other have mentioned, i would recomend taking a second go on the right file icons.
     
    patrickberry, Oct 27, 2008 IP
  17. rickybuitrago

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    #37
    I would give a greater highlight to benefits
     
    rickybuitrago, Oct 27, 2008 IP
  18. Capler

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    #38
    Larger font, bit less text. There is a lot going on in the page and someone could easily get confused. This is especially true if they are not technically savvy.

    Larger download button, and also add one to the bottom of the page!
     
    Capler, Oct 27, 2008 IP