Please REVIEW my Landing Page! Need your help...

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by centarec, Oct 11, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi all...

    I plan to release my product in the following days, so I was wondering if you can review my landing page and give me some opinion about it...any hints...or ideas.

    www.passwordresetter.com

    Videos will also follow with instruction how does it work. Written testimonials?

    Thanks guys...
     
    centarec, Oct 11, 2009 IP
  2. centarec

    centarec Member

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    Come on guys not a single comment?! I really need your opinion, since this is my first product and I want to make it right.
     
    centarec, Oct 12, 2009 IP
  3. Legendary11

    Legendary11 Well-Known Member

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    youve wrote 29.95 but its 29.99 on the order page :)

    love it other wise... carnt you add a youtube video showing how easy it is to use? if not then send me a pm and ill do it for you since im rather intrested in selling this now XD
     
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  4. centarec

    centarec Member

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    @Legendary11 - Video will be uploaded in few hours, maybe hour or so. The price has been fixed :D Also testimonials will follow. This all should be done in hour or so and everything will be ready. Than I can PM you with more details. Thanks for your revision.
     
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  5. rtp06

    rtp06 Peon

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    #5
    congratulations on your first product. I hope it becomes very successful for you.
     
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    #6
    i prefer to use more readable header font.

    Good luck with your product
     
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  7. FBclient

    FBclient Banned

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    #7
    just hear and watch for this moment. wait and see...
     
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  8. mikeyman120

    mikeyman120 Peon

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    Good luck. Looks nice. I think it is the shortest Clickbank site I have ever seen.

    Mike
     
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  9. alexa_s

    alexa_s Peon

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    Hi :)

    I think it looks really nice! Someone did a good job here.

    Very unusual design, and refreshing, and different. I'd be really pleased with it, myself.

    I think it's really "non-hypey" (that's a compliment!). But it says what you need to say and explains the benefits.

    My little observations are really small, pedantic points which might make absolutely no difference to your sales at all ...

    (i) The gray color at the top part of the page looks kind of light? Maybe a shade darker (or black) might be easier for some people to read, depending on their screen? And the gray color much lower down above the guarantee where it says "Password Resetter has proven itself to thousands of happy customers and we proudly stand behind our product. Safely order today with our Certificate of Guarantee" is really light!

    (ii) You have a typo in the first section: it says "It does now harm your computer" (!!) (you meant "it does not harm your computer" - you could say "it does your computer no harm at all", perhaps?)

    (iii) You could run the spell-check (I found "techincal" instead of "technical" on the FAQ page, and there might be other typos I missed?)

    (iv) Where it says (in the "tick-bullet points") "lifetime licence - no reoccuring charges", you might use the word "recurring" instead of "reoccuring"? "Reoccuring" is a word, I think, but "recurring" is more usually used?

    If this is all that people can find wrong with it, it can't be bad!

    How big the market is, I have no idea. But you must know - and I don't doubt you'll get your share of the market with this. I like it. Good luck! (Nice affiliate page, too!).
     
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  10. centarec

    centarec Member

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    @alexa_s - Thank you very much for your comments. I always respected your opinion. I am glad that you liked it. I will take all the points you mentioned in consideration and make all the changes you referred to.

    Thank you guys for the hints. They were very helpful.
     
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  11. slonce

    slonce Greenhorn

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    The web site looks very organized and clean. Good luck with your product. It looks promising.
     
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  12. Curt92

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    Good video, seems like the product actually works, might look into buying it.
     
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  13. myfortune

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    #13
    "Now everyone can do it! Safely reset your Windows password in few seconds!"


    This header should be in BOLD RED QOUTES

    I think you should be more urgent in your delivery like "Discover The Powerful New Tool That Can Access Your
    Windows Passwords Safely Without Damage To Your Current Settings!"
     
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  14. vitalous

    vitalous Guest

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    This is one of those few products that an affiliate might actually buy/use without having to beg/borrow/steal a review copy! :)

    John
     
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  15. simply-seo

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    #15
    The site looks good,
    you can try replacing the blue background with like twitter background images, but something that expresses more effectively like a visual imagination of password resetting that will keep make the visitors more engaged.
     
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  16. mushu

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    Congratulations guys, the product itself looks very good once approved i will definitely promote it. Regarding your site i think it looks very good, just fix the stuff that other people said like testimonials and similar and it will be perfect. Good luck
     
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    #17
    short, solid, attractive and colors looking good
     
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  18. alexa_s

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    With apologies for introducing a contentious note, I think part of its strength, at the moment, is precisely that it's avoided all the stuff like that, that everyone assumes will work better for their product just because cut-price copywriters habitually copy it from page to page with no apparent thought for niche or product.

    It has dignity, professionalism, credibility, etc.

    The credibility of this site, as it stands, for me, is its "non-hypiness". This isn't a product that needs the heavy-handed, "persuasive" style of marketing, and I suspect all that stuff with the bold red quotes and Capital Letters Everywhere, and all the crap about "urgency" and "scarcity" and so on would make it lose that credibility.

    It would be interesting to do a version like that, "All Hyped Up", and then split-test it against this one.

    My money would be firmly on this one. ;)
     
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  19. rtp06

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    I personally wouldn't have put "Beware of Cheap Imitations..." because this might encourage the reader to shop around for a cheaper.... imitation... lol. But yeah since you're the original and the best then its not even worth mentioning any others. PEACE
     
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  20. truefacts1

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    Very direct and easy to read... Good job... the product looks very relevant as well...
     
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