Please Review My Iphone Releated Website

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    Jermaine723, Aug 14, 2008 IP
  2. human

    human Peon

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    The header is nice but the text in the header must be in the image (not an html text)
    I don't like the other part of the site
     
    human, Aug 14, 2008 IP
  3. Anna M

    Anna M Active Member

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    The header looks good, but you might try changing the title color to be a little more contrasting.

    I don't like the sidebars - the text is so small and has the same color... it's really boring!

    The Adsense banners stand out from the rest of the content (and not in a good way!). Try changing their colors to blend with the content.
     
    Anna M, Aug 15, 2008 IP
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    Yes.. You need to move the Adsense banners.. The blue on the page clashes with the blue on the banners. Plus, there is nothing else white on your page, so the banners look way out of place. I don't like the navigation setup. It gets lost in the rest of the text.
     
    RoyDixon, Aug 15, 2008 IP
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    The color is nice but I think some more SEPARATION is need in the columns, its a bit cluttered.
     
    guillebravo6, Aug 15, 2008 IP
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    Thank you for reviews.I will look for them.

    How can i promote this site then?
     
    Jermaine723, Aug 16, 2008 IP
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    I really think something simple and more 'apple' style for the banner would work 1000 times better. I've made one below, feel free to use it or PM me for the PSD.

    [​IMG]
     
    DansTuts, Aug 16, 2008 IP
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    There is so much text. It's hard to look at. Incorporate some pleasing images, perhaps.
     
    CharlesHurst, Aug 16, 2008 IP
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    The header looks good but the rest of the site does not look quite as good as
    the header, I think you should add some more colors into the color scheme
    of the template. I agree with CharlesHurst I think you should put some
    images in the body of the document to break up the text.
     
    kingofsanda, Aug 16, 2008 IP