hmmm its a bit short and even to the average consumer will seem dogy. Add a introduction, ask a question and then relate to the customer. Then instead of recomending the unlimited, ad that " we use the unlimited for better performance." Try this.
Fix your typos, and i agree with Bunneh have an introduction that explains more of what the topic is. Other then that it was good.
1. There is no image 2. Hub score too low 3. There is no backlink 4. There are 2 outbound backlink (use only 1) 5. The main keyword didn't obvious..