please review my health site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by digitalpointdino, May 24, 2010.

  1. #1
    hi...all friends, please review my health site
    URL : http://strawburry17.tv/
    give me any suggestions and i will appreciate with any comments, positive or negative to improve my site.:)
     
    digitalpointdino, May 24, 2010 IP
  2. Get Inspired

    Get Inspired Peon

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    #2
    It looks too busy IMO.

    Add some images, take away some stuff -- less is more. I think you need to do something to really capture the readers eye quickly.
     
    Get Inspired, May 24, 2010 IP
  3. tanisha21

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    #3
    nice work..............a little more reader friendly would make ot perfect.
     
    tanisha21, May 24, 2010 IP
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    digitalpointdino Peon

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    #4
    thanks for your suggestions, i want to remove my bookmarks and add some images..
     
    digitalpointdino, May 24, 2010 IP
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    aqif Member

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    #5
    Hey there,

    About the website. First of all, I don't think the domain suits for the niche. http://strawburry17.tv/ doesn't related for any health niche right?

    And I also agree with Tanisha. You should add more image and try to design your post. Overall, the content is okay.

    Just my 2 cent. Thank you. :)
     
    aqif, May 24, 2010 IP
  6. gees7

    gees7 Well-Known Member

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    Hi,
    The site content is good but the point is that the outlook gives you a feel of some forum rather than a blog. You need to change the template and add some pictures linking to your post. That will make it more user friendly and enhance the looks.
     
    gees7, May 24, 2010 IP
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    hi,
    Your blog is too filled with writing, it's better slicked with an appropriate image.
    But for the articles, you have good work....
    Thank you
     
    vega76, May 24, 2010 IP
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    #8
    Great site, i like it.
     
    Neropaco, May 26, 2010 IP
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    #9
    Its great but .. you need to work little bit hard to add more information to your site :)
     
    snake1k1, May 26, 2010 IP
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    aniket123 Greenhorn

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    Nice site, good tips and information.. keep it up
     
    aniket123, May 27, 2010 IP
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    #11
    It looks too basic, add more design into it.
     
    aleks32, May 27, 2010 IP
  12. digitalpointdino

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    now, i have changed the title to health supplement, you can look the differences...
     
    digitalpointdino, Jun 26, 2010 IP
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    Overall, this is pretty decent. Colors are nice, but the head could use some work and a better logo.
     
    tmears, Jun 26, 2010 IP