Please review my health site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Sinhag, Sep 15, 2009.

  1. #1
    I am newbi in blogging, my name sinhag from indonesia.
    please review my site and leave your worth comment.
    Baby care and health

    Thanks

    Sinhag:)
     
    Sinhag, Sep 15, 2009 IP
  2. cah_bagoes

    cah_bagoes Member

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    #2
    thats good blog and i think your blog will get good rank
     
    cah_bagoes, Sep 15, 2009 IP
  3. cout16

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    #3
    Nice content you should make some cash with it
     
    cout16, Sep 18, 2009 IP
  4. workathomeshop

    workathomeshop Notable Member

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    #4
    Sorry but your articles make no sense :confused:

    "quote from one of your articles"
    Your banking cachet will play a big allotment in your decisions. Abounding adolescent affiliated couples do not accept that abundant money in the alpha of their alliance so it may be a acceptable abstraction

    :eek:
     
    workathomeshop, Sep 22, 2009 IP
  5. ludwig

    ludwig Notable Member

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    #5
    it seems a bit dull with no images on the post, here is a sample with images: www.ababycare.com

    make it for mothers, smth nice, smth amusing rather than just content
     
    ludwig, Sep 22, 2009 IP
  6. kaioken89

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    #6
    Layout looks nice and clean, but you need a logo on the top. The graphics are also a little lacking.
     
    kaioken89, Sep 22, 2009 IP
  7. Mygster

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    I think your website needs to be more "baby like", it look like a interet, IT information webiste. Try to find a "baby wp theme"
     
    Mygster, Sep 22, 2009 IP
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    #8
    Definitely a neat, clean look but a little boring.... needs more graphics.
    Whoever translated the articles into English mustn't know the language very well or did you have a program do the translating? Most of the sentences make no sense at all so you need to find somebody who can proof-read or check it for you.
    Great idea for a blog.
     
    mishi7, Sep 23, 2009 IP
  9. Prachi4Webdev

    Prachi4Webdev Guest

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    #9
    As you are Newbie in blogging, so i must say its a good start. Your blog looks neat and clean. I haven't gone through your blog content. I guess lots of members pointed out something about your content. So note down and resolve those poitns asap coz users mainly visit in blog/website for information i.e. website content.

    Best of luck
     
    Prachi4Webdev, Sep 23, 2009 IP
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    #10
    very good site. Nice content. You are have good pagerank = 3 . Keep it up.
     
    abinowbhat, Sep 23, 2009 IP
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    #11
    He's right. i couldn't understand your content.
    You should always copy-read, before you post articles.
     
    drdavisjr, Sep 23, 2009 IP
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    #12
    Make sure the Recommended Sites area is populated, and make sure enough text exists to fill all the pages. Overall i like the theme, graphics, template, etc, and feel the content is solid!
     
    thisisadam, Oct 21, 2009 IP