Please Review my Health Blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by MeniacMachine, Dec 28, 2008.

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  1. #1
    Hi! This is my first blog:

    http://hygienetalks.blogspot.com/

    I am hoping I could make it more nicer and prettier for the readers.

    Any comments and suggestions are highly appreciated.

    Thanks~
     
    MeniacMachine, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  2. Barakos

    Barakos Peon

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    #2
    Hi,

    The Colors are great and the design is also not bad,
    I think you have to decrease the amount of text/information in the home page
    Currently it looks really messy to me.
    The human eye does not like that many details at once .
    My tip is minimizing home page and you’ll get a much cleaner and nicer look.

    Wish you the best
    Thanks
     
    Barakos, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  3. sarirejo

    sarirejo Well-Known Member

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    I don't know what to say,
    but your blog really full of ads.
     
    sarirejo, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  4. river

    river Active Member

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    I would use a horizontal google ad unit above the posts and a vertical one in the sidebar, rather than two square units above the posts. Also, the "Guide" in "Guide and Advice to keep..." doesn't sound right. I would change it to "Advice on keeping..."
     
    river, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  5. fatality

    fatality Banned

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    #5
    It's pretty much really good!
    but why don't you put it on normal domain , .info costs 99cents nowadays . Even I have placed my blog on normal .net domain http://www.loan2.net
     
    fatality, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  6. kingofsanda

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    I do not like the placement of your adsense ads, I think you should remove these
    ads or put them somewhere else on the page. I think you should get a logo and
    add some graphics to the page.
     
    kingofsanda, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  7. justinlorder

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    I like the theme , round corner and catching header .
    Is the theme available for wordpress ? I will take it .
     
    justinlorder, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  8. MeniacMachine

    MeniacMachine Peon

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    Ok thanks everybody. I edited my BLOG now. Please if you can visit it again.
    Any other comments?

    @justinlorder
    I dunno. sorry.
     
    MeniacMachine, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  9. lycos

    lycos Well-Known Member

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    #9
    Sometimes it's not about being "nicer and prettier for the readers". What matters most is value added unique content that gives a reason for visitors to stick around.
     
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  10. MeniacMachine

    MeniacMachine Peon

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    wow. Okay, can you give some example?

    thanks.
     
    MeniacMachine, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  11. lycos

    lycos Well-Known Member

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    I don't know what kind of example do you need. You just need to write, that's all :)
     
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  12. MeniacMachine

    MeniacMachine Peon

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    ahh.. i see. thanks.
     
    MeniacMachine, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  13. mrhrk01

    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    #13
    Nice colour scheme,
    You dont need to make your site nicer and prettier as it nice, i would recommend you start writing articles and uplaoding them to your blog and hopefully you will get even more visitors.

    One other thing i think it would help if you could organise the homepage so that it does not appear messy but appear organised this will help with making the site looker "nicer".

    Kind Regards.
     
    mrhrk01, Dec 29, 2008 IP