Please review my freebie site +rep

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  1. #1
    http://iphoneforfree.co.nr

    Please review as

    Appearance- (out of)/10

    Info- (out of)/10

    Consideration- (out of)/10 (10 means you would definately sign up say
    you were an average internet user)



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  2. Zepia

    Zepia Peon

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    #2
    Appearance: 3/10
    Info: 2/10
    Consideration: 1/10

    Sorry to be blunt/harsh but it looks like you made the site with just text and gradients, everything is all over the place and is not appealing to the eye.

    The Info is not enough, and it sounds like a teenager wrote it, use some tables to separate text from the site and try to align it along with the graphics, create a cool logo.

    Agaiin I'm not trying to bash your site at all, I'll give you props for trying to be original but unless you have something very unique on your site, people will visit and immediately leave.

    Get some SEO, better graphics and a good template and you will be rolling in no time! :)
     
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  3. Petro_

    Petro_ Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Appearance- 2/10
    Info- 4/10
    Consideration- 2/10

    You need professional design. Sorry but it looks bad.
     
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  4. shaunr

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    oh, wow. i never thought it was that bad. ok. I'll se what i can do
     
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  5. cijoaj2003

    cijoaj2003 Banned

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    #5
    Colour used: 2/10
    Appearance: 2/10
    Unique Content:4/10
    Info: 3/10
    Consideration: 2/10

    You need to avoid bright colours. Use some simple colours like sky blue, white, light green or something like that. Design a professional logo. Make the sign up button smaller and place it somewhere near the i-phone pictures on top. Place more clear i-phone images/pictures.


    Hope you now get a better idea on your website.
     
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    #6
    Appearance- 7/10
    I think your images need to be lined up correctly.
    The "Sign Up" button needs to be aligned correctly too.

    Info- 6/10
    The info is OK, a little confusing, I had to read twice to make sure I understood it.

    Consideration- 4/10 I think I would need a little more convincing, also, I recommend not giving people the option to click back on their web browser, it's an invitation for them to leave your site, you don't really want them to do that.

    Good luck!
     
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  7. THEDert

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    #7
    Appearance- 1/10
    Info- 2/10
    Consideration- 2/10
     
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  8. shaunr

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    #8

    Good ideas. but this is still going to be hard work as I'm going to have to do a lot of replacing of files as I don't want to reupload the site and have to get a new domain. I'll see what I can do in the next 45 minutes.
     
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    The header is loading too slow and the sign up button is overlapped on the text, try to move it little bit down the text. Change the text which in black color to some other color, it is unable to read.
     
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    nhc1987 Notable Member

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    Yup, got this error

     
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  11. camp185

    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    site failed to load. Saw the title though.
     
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  12. BlackWaterBlog

    BlackWaterBlog Banned

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    #12
    Site is dead:

    The connection has timed out

    The server at 110mb.com is taking too long to respond.
     
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  13. Chris.o

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    #13
    Appearance- 2/10
    Info- 3/10
    Consideration- 2/10

    I think if you had a professional design it would be alot better.
     
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    Server time out....
     
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  15. Kirsty H

    Kirsty H Banned

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    #15
    There appears to be issues with your host www.110mb.com - I would worry about that more than the actual site. I strongly advise not to use 110Mb and look at paid hosting options.
     
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    L3G10N Well-Known Member

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    Site is not loading. I recommend getting a decent webhost. I use enomcentral..
     
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  17. shaunr

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  18. rajakamil.com

    rajakamil.com Banned

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    #18
    Appearance- 2/10

    Info- 3/10

    Consideration- 1/10

    Adsense make it look bad
     
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  19. shaunr

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    Adsence? Oh, haha. you clicked the wrong link
     
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  20. ChrisMiller

    ChrisMiller Prominent Member

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    Hey Shaunr,


    Yea your site looks like its down..

    You might want to get someone fix that bud ;)

    -Chris
     
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