Please Review My First WordPress Site

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    iamsgf, Oct 22, 2007 IP
  2. results_assured

    results_assured Peon

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    #2
    Nice picture...

    Can you break the content in to small paras with attractive subheadings? No one would ever bother reading entire page this way..

    - Can you place that login link someware on main view?
    - concider changing color rather than being plain white?

    Regards
     
    results_assured, Oct 22, 2007 IP
  3. Randall_Flagg

    Randall_Flagg Banned

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    #3
    I think that it is really good, it looks very organised and bussiness like, but a background other than white would make it a lot more attractive.
     
    Randall_Flagg, Oct 22, 2007 IP
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    Sgf,
    your site looks OK though a bit too much on the white site.They say simple is best.
    Are you making any money with it?

    Anyone can review my new site?

    Thank you!
    http://www.mlmrecruit.com


    I received it as a present all set up but not sure what to do with it.
    I cannot even edit it because it is all in "PHP". I tried to edit the file and it "messed up the entire site" Guess I have to study php now.
    anyone knows a short cut to PPC? I meant php geez...

    I started to create subdirectories since i cannot touch the home_html . The good thing about this whole gift though is that i got paid hosting for a full year and have some 40GB of space.

    By the way it was built by Russell what's his other name... the 12 million dollar Guy...fighter anyways he does offer the site free but then the hosting for a year is above $200 for 40GB of space.
     
    robertino, Oct 22, 2007 IP
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    how did u add the flight tables on your post there. it looks clean...but i would recommend you not using cutline. is it cutline theme? it would be better to shy away from mega popular wordpress themes.
     
    bloggernoob, Oct 23, 2007 IP
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    #6
    Nice layout
     
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    #7
    Your site looks good, but the white background is a bit too bright for me.
     
    tsa, Oct 23, 2007 IP
  8. iamsgf

    iamsgf Active Member

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    thanks for the reviews guys. yup using the cutline theme. mian idea is to make a seo friendly site, that will rank highly and earn money from clicks. I am now doing design for the flight search to liven the site up, will probably do something with the columns as well to distingust them better.
     
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    #9
    The site is fine layout wise, but the white background is a bit overwhelming. You should try to add some glossy colors to grab the users attention a bit better. Otherwise they might visit, take a peek, then just leave.
     
    pharcyded, Oct 23, 2007 IP
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    nice cutline theme, i use the same for pistonpost.com but try not to make the adsense so obvious
    best of luck
     
    niftydrumdude, Oct 23, 2007 IP
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    Drop downs dont appear properly in firefox. I cant see how many people I am booking flight for

    Doug
     
    dougs, Oct 23, 2007 IP
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    #12
    make sure you add the href tags to links...
     
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    #13
    edit the script such that, if there are no comments, it wont give that option for "what users say"
    Also add a logo to the site, that will make it more professional.
     
    buntoo, Oct 23, 2007 IP
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    #14
    simple and straight to the point i like it.
     
    tyler60us, Oct 23, 2007 IP
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    #15
    Good one to start with.
     
    createrk, Oct 26, 2007 IP
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    #16
    I think you could use a better image (unless the one there already means something), as it is it doesn't add much to the site. I would also consider getting a custom logo and changing over to one side column only.

    good luck
     
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    well I stuck to a 3 column cos people are used to seeing it. Decided to use text rather than logo for SEO reasons and also because it is just infomation rather than brand.

    Keep the comments coming. Thanks
     
    iamsgf, Oct 26, 2007 IP
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    Couldn't get to the site, is it down?
     
    nasium, Oct 26, 2007 IP
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    iamsgf Active Member

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    nope all is working fine
     
    iamsgf, Oct 27, 2007 IP