Please review my first Squidoo lens

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    bestwriter, Jun 17, 2010 IP
  2. austinwest64

    austinwest64 Peon

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    Hmm well looks informative and all but maybe you should break up the very large text content things into separate text modules, or when moving the a new section bold the first sentence to let them know.
     
    austinwest64, Jun 27, 2010 IP
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    The only thing I think you should do is update your Bio. It looks unfinished with "Hello world. This is my bio. I can edit it later!"
     
    cybatech, Jun 27, 2010 IP
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    cool design ,good informative work use larger or darker fonts it would be better
     
    dileep reddy, Jun 28, 2010 IP
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    I personally thought it was great! Some work on the typography wouldn't hurt but great job :)
     
    FallingAts, Jun 28, 2010 IP
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    it is really informative i like this thanks for this
     
    ashu_sood08, Jun 28, 2010 IP
  7. griffiths.nic

    griffiths.nic Active Member

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    yeah good work mate
     
    griffiths.nic, Jun 30, 2010 IP