Hi, Do you ever find that your children or yourself are always leaving a mess around the house. How about a spouse? If so then I hope that you will take three minutes to watch my first YouTube comedy about messy people. Please let me know what you think and share it with anyone who might be able to relate. Thank you. -Pete
Here are a couple of things that I noticed: Add an intro or something that "smoothens" the video. The first cut at 0:10 was really unexpected and was a bit hard to fit in. Maybe adding some background sound/music to the video would make it a lot better. Add some background music to cover the noise made by the camera As I stated above, background music would help both the editing and cover the noise made by the camera.
Video is ok but you need some background music - you can made original music with few free programs. Also you need one intro video and if you have a website or facebook page you can integrate a small "watermark" in right corner. You can see one model here (with intro, background music and watermark): Thanks!
Negatives:The video was ok. It didnt really keep my intrest through the entire thing. It seemed kind of dull, music or maybe even a tiny bit less of a mono tone would help improve it. Positives: It flowed Smoothly. Had some humorous points. All together I would give it a 6/10 good effort. Keep making videos.