Hi, it's quite simple for the chords, but as for the lyrics I really can't understand, if you record it again you should separate the guitar and the voice and mix it back together in a sound software such as audacity or garage band if you're on mac. If I was an aspiring song writer I'd try to do songs about internet stuff because those are shared more easily.. Maybe not as inspiring as life and love, but you can mix love and internet, life and internet, get creative then release it but with better sound quality, it helps! Good work!
pretty damn good mate. you voice is pretty good thats for sure. one thing about my original songs, they stay hidden and un-heard apart from family and friends atm. releasing your own songs for people to listen to is to easy to steal. but its always good to hear feed bad. good job mate, never give up