Please review my first blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Gallito, Jan 12, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hey all, just made my first blog ever and I was wondering how you guys like the layout, concept, adsense placement, etc. Any and all comments appreciated, thanks in advance.

    Jim Reviews
     
    Gallito, Jan 12, 2008 IP
  2. Kuttan

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    #2
    Dear friend,

    I visited your Blog Jim Reviews Squidoo. It Okey and Fine.

    Thanks for the information of Squidoo.

    Well Done.

    Thanks.
     
    Kuttan, Jan 13, 2008 IP
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    #3
    Your blog is ok, but ads on it are getting annoying...
     
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  4. Gallito

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    Yeah figured that they might be a bit over the top lol
     
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    I am not sure about the tower adverts middleish, makes the design not look as nice, instead try putting some 468's between text, will get more clicks and looks a lot better. Also get a banner not text
     
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    I like that you have a TLD and thought the content was good. However, it would look better if you had a custom template. Your own favicon would be a nice addition also.
     
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    swedal Notable Member

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    Very plain site with very little content.
     
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    I like it. It's simple and not too distracting. If there was something that I could tell you that you need to work on, it would be the pictures. On the Squidoo post you could add some screenshots about squidoo so the reader could be more interested in what you are trying to say. When you actually show them something via pictures on what you are reviewing, they will form the idea as you being a person that is an expert in what you are promoting. You also want photos to be there to stop readers from drifting off into day dreaming.
     
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  9. caj

    caj Active Member

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    Content wise - it's pretty good. But somehow I just think the header is slightly out of place - try smaller font for the tags.
     
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    You've picked a nice theme and an easy to remember domain name. Your content is of high quality too.. you're on the right track!
     
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    The colour selection and the layout is very good, put more information as well.
     
    gitasha, Jan 14, 2008 IP
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    #12
    Nice design and layout. Good choice using a three column template. Nice article about Fire Fox and good idea using adsense referral in it :p You might want to change your background or put same image for your header

    You might want to change your ads in the top page and insert it inside the post below the title, i earned more from that section. Try not to use skycrapper banners. Keep up the good work.
     
    VampireXxX, Jan 14, 2008 IP
  13. mariushca

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    #13
    The connection has timed out.

    The server at *** is taking too long to respond.

    Error.
     
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    dvdAuction Banned

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    #14
    you have a nice layout there.. i suggest add some customize heading to add some design on your site..
     
    dvdAuction, Jan 14, 2008 IP
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    #15
    ok for me,but i dont like your long long title.sorry to say.
     
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    #16
    Woha. A little cluttered. The header is huge.
     
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  17. Gallito

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    It is two days old. I'm not going to spew out crap to impress people in the first week of my blog.
     
    Gallito, Jan 14, 2008 IP
  18. Gallito

    Gallito Peon

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    #18
    Yeah got a sign up from it ;)

    Edit: To those posting about my header, I plan to shorten my title which will reduce the size by half, on this topic anyone have a suggestion for a better title? (hoping for some SEO value).
     
    Gallito, Jan 14, 2008 IP