Please review my eBook Sales Page

Discussion in 'Websites' started by The Emirates Gallastico, Nov 10, 2007.

  1. #1
    Just set this up; aye, I know that 'Selling' is spelt wrong in the title (my designer did that and I overlooked it until a couple hours ago)... but other than that, whaddya think? :p

    Earn With eBooks
     
    The Emirates Gallastico, Nov 10, 2007 IP
  2. lychee

    lychee Active Member

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    Your blue logo gets lost in the midst of the blue background.
    i recommend you use a plain-colour background with a darker blue. It'll really bring out the important stuff which is what you're trying to sell.
    thanks
     
    lychee, Nov 10, 2007 IP
  3. kjarva

    kjarva Member

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    I'd also suggest changing the background. It's just too distracting when you're trying to read the text of what your ebook is, it keeps drawing your eyes away from it. Maybe even just make it a fairly plain background?
     
    kjarva, Nov 10, 2007 IP
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    izbryte Well-Known Member

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    es, I have to agree. Everything is sort-of "bland". Adding some contrasting color and more graphics would probably hold you visitors longer. Good luck!
     
    izbryte, Nov 10, 2007 IP
  5. The Emirates Gallastico

    The Emirates Gallastico Banned

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    Thanks for the reviews guys, will look at changing things. Fixed the header :D
     
    The Emirates Gallastico, Nov 10, 2007 IP
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    super Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Looks nice, however I would definetely change a background or a header color - both are blue and the header does not standout. Also i would add one or two pictures/graphs/testimonials or whatever to make page more entertaining
     
    super, Nov 10, 2007 IP
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    Rugbyfan69 Banned

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    Nice but background is to close to header
     
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  8. greatbizideas

    greatbizideas Peon

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    #8
    its plain and simple. Try to make the header small. I am using my 12" laptop and I need to scroll down to see the buy now button
     
    greatbizideas, Nov 11, 2007 IP