Please review my charity site

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  1. #1
    What do you think?.. what next?... what would you've added? .. Do you like it? thanks very much! :)
    http://cozay.com
     
    Gloria1, Mar 3, 2008 IP
  2. ASHSMI

    ASHSMI Peon

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    #2
    looks professional,prehaps move and enlarge the donate button,prehaps in a side panel in the main part
     
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  3. Gloria1

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    thanks Ashmi! for your comment! i really appreciate it!:)
     
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  4. TheSites

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    #4
    your content on 'the power to change' page is too wide. Make it thinner or 2 columns, when I read it it's hard to find my spot on the next line when i reach the end.
     
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  5. Gloria1

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    great! thanks very much! .. i'll work on that! thanks for your comment! I really appreciate it!:)
     
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  6. Maxiorel

    Maxiorel Active Member

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    Hi, it looks nice. But I think you should beware of blue color of normal text. It looks like an URL but it doesn't.
     
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  7. Gloria1

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    thanks Max! .. i got it! .. well i was just trying to highligt some points but they do look like links instead!.. Thanks very much for your comment.. I'll work on that soon!.. I really appreciate your comment thanks!:)
     
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  8. Gloria1

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    thanks "thesites" .. I tried working on the power to change and i think everything is working good now.. thanks very much for your comment!
     
    Gloria1, Mar 9, 2008 IP
  9. SubmitSmart

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    #9
    After you initiated the changes, the site is looking much better! Make sure you develop your meta tags
     
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    Nice design great work & mostly i like in your site the comment page.
     
    Anand85, Mar 10, 2008 IP
  11. iluvmypug

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    looks great.. the pictures are very moving... great work...
     
    iluvmypug, Mar 11, 2008 IP
  12. Gloria1

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    Thanks very much for your comments! (Anand85 and Iluvmypug), I really appreciate it! :)
     
    Gloria1, Mar 11, 2008 IP
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    #13
    Nice design I really like the site
     
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  14. sherife

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    #14
    In general your site is professional and looks great. I would maybe add spaces or choose a bigger font. Also the article about PCs is using yellow color, which I can't read under a light background. I would choose a darker color.
    With all the pictures you have, I would try to create a slide show, this can have a bigger impact. You can look at slide.com for this.
    Good luck!
     
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  15. Gloria1

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    Great! thanks Sherrif for your comment I really appreciate it! :)
     
    Gloria1, Mar 12, 2008 IP
  16. Gloria1

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    I have made some changes! what do you think? still more work to be done? thanks very much for your support!:)
     
    Gloria1, Mar 13, 2008 IP
  17. Gloria1

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    any more comments will be highly appreciated! thanks all for your support!:)
     
    Gloria1, Mar 14, 2008 IP
  18. isabelliese

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    #18
    From a philosophical point of view, I like it. BUT:

    Too many words, not enough design; Web is about the eye. Invite the user in. The two central pictures are the best, put the lowest up first to gently lead the user into the hard stuff. Remove the disparate comments from the menus and collect them into one area. Give some interest to the page by placing groups of quotes in different formats. For examples of cramming lots of copy onto a page in an organized manner, check some of the pages at BBC dot co dot uk. And did I suggest that you should take the copy off the index page? Sit back for awhile and think of different subjects for different pages, then match the appropriate quotes with the appropriate page. Don't grab at us; With those two pictures, we'll listen. The two pictures in the body of your text have the raw feeling of "now" written all over them. Don't lose that feeling.
     
    isabelliese, Mar 14, 2008 IP
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    #19
    nice site and very informative... you can add link to donation page as a topmenu after 'comments'

    agree with Maxiorel about blue color text

     
    spartax, Mar 14, 2008 IP
  20. Gloria1

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    thanks spartax! i'm working on that!
     
    Gloria1, Mar 15, 2008 IP