Please Review My Celebrity Fitness Website

Website is how to build a muscle body

Please review and let me know what you think. Thank you in advance!

 

I'd honestly re-design it and make it more user friendly, the text over the image at the top is kind of hard to read, and the website could have a little more organization (i'm really not trying to be mean or anything just giving my personal opinion )

 

nice landing page

 

Guys, I have ENTIRELY revamped the website, so I want to get opinions on what you think of my landing page

THANKS

 

I'd vote for the re-design as well. If you wish to promote a product you should, perhaps, pay more attention to the layout and pics. The scene from the movie at the top isn't the best choice. But - this is only my personal point of view.

 

maybe you can take the initiative to purchase the domain com/net/biz
and it will make your website more professional

 

@tom, thanks for the suggestion.

@indoambo, if I were to buy my own domain, will I be able to get rid of the labels and stuff showing up at the bottom of the page?

 

I liked your site.
would be more interesting if the model in the show is well-known artists​

 

Yeah indeed you gotta change the design and theme there is even no navigation.

 

I'd work on re-doing your concept at the top of the page. A before and after muscle shot with a different slogan would grab the reader more.

 

@oqsales. hey that's a great idea. i'm liking it. thanks alot.
@jeffsmith. I purposely placed the navigation only at the bottom of the page since i preferred people seeing my main landing page only. or do you mean another thing? pls tell me if you do!
@balagadona81. thanks for liking my site. I can't put some random artist up there as i want to show others my transformation and making them know that i have the ability to help them get a similar transformation too..

 

@ignotrinanto. thanks
@oqsales. I have changed the general format. what do you think of it now? anyway by slogan, do you mean "gain weight | build muscle" or "Your Express Route To A Hollywood Star Body"??

 

I don't generally like these presentations, one long onrunning page that ends up doing nothing but try to sell ya something.... but it's well presented.

 

@SeekNDestroy. but in my case, it's a really free download for people, all they have to do is subscribe. only on the next page then will i provide a limited time offer.

 

interesting guy.

 

Simple informative site... But it seems that your header text and header graphic isn't join perfectly.

 

@goy. thanks
@enumz. thanks, and okay i'll deal with that asap.

By the way, what do you think of this landing page? It's actually the page where you go to after you sign up for the 2 ebooks
http://gainweightbuildmuscle.blogspot.com/p/celebrity-body-secrets-finally-revealed.html

 

guys? what do you think?

 

okay i've given it quite a touch up, looks simple and nice now. any way to convert further? i know you guys are great at doing this. haha

 

Simple, i Like it.