please review my blogspot grammar

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by dFizzy, Dec 17, 2014.

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    Need review my grammar... english not my primary language...

    http://healthy-relationship-advice.blogspot.com

    Thanks
     
    dFizzy, Dec 17, 2014 IP
  2. .RT

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    I'm sorry to say, but it's filled with grammatical mistakes. Why don't you write these articles in your native language?
     
    .RT, Dec 18, 2014 IP
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    Yes, why not write it in your native language or hire a writer/editor? There are lots of freelance copywriters and/or editors out there.
     
    Droid82, Dec 19, 2014 IP
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    01123581321345589144 Active Member

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    Either target a market that speaks your native language and write in that language OR hire people to edit or write your articles in good english. Poor english in websites really kills the site. Good luck.
     
    01123581321345589144, Jan 8, 2015 IP
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    dFizzy Member

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    But my targeted traffic is usa or ca :( so i must write on english
    The article from my english teacher... I can't believe he has bad grammar
    yep i know... but the writer is my teacher... :( i think is easy for him to write english article
     
    dFizzy, Jan 11, 2015 IP
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    I thought it was yours?........................................ You said "Need review my grammar"
     
    Droid82, Jan 12, 2015 IP
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    articles in english for a teacher shoud'nt be difficult.
     
    anna boros, Jan 15, 2015 IP
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    OP, the design of your site is quite pleasing to the eye and the layout looks uncluttered. I think most of the menu and content put up is also accessible pretty easily.

    Well, about the content … since you yourself admit that your grammar is not up to the mark, there's really nothing you can do except getting your content written from a good writer. I wouldn't recommend putting up text in your mother tongue or local language unless you're exclusively targeting an audience which speaks them.
    The topics you've covered are also good and comprehensive but you should keep on adding more and more content and updating your blog if you want a higher amount of traffic and consistently returning visitors. Nobody really cares to visit a site which is not abuzz with activity.

    Last but not the least, don't forget to work on the SEO part. Target especially the high-traffic and popular keywords easily obtainable from free tools as Google Keyword Planner, but don't overuse them. Stuffing your content with keywords beyond the recommended density which is 2-3% maximum makes it unnatural and lose any reader-oriented value.

    WHATEVER HAPPENS, DON'T COPY CONTENT FROM OTHER WEBSITES/BLOGS. Doing so is harmful for your online reputation and you'll get sued for Copyright Infringement. One DMCA notice shot at you is enough to take down your domain within minutes. Simply crediting the original sources doesn't mean you're safe. You've to obtain the necessary permissions from the authors before using their work. Copying others' stuff will make your blog lose any real UNIQUE value, which is one of the most important factors that makes you stand out among the thousands of other similar blogs out there and helps you to surpass the fierce competition.

    Can't really believe BTW that sort of grammar can come from an English teacher. >:O Are you sure he's one? ;)

    Hope this helps. Good luck.:)
     
    Content Maestro, Jan 15, 2015 IP