Please review my blog.

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ajitpalsingh10, Jul 24, 2008.

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    I am currently using text link ads,bidvertiser,adbrite,shoppingads and widgetbucks.Shall I add adsense to this blog.The blog is the first one in my signature.
     
    ajitpalsingh10, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  2. magnamatt

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    The paragraphs are very difficult to read...perhaps breaking them up into more readable sentence structure would help.

    I don't like ads, but they don't detract too much as they are only on one side of the blog.
     
    magnamatt, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  3. kingofsanda

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    The design does not look professional you should get a
    professional template for the blog.
     
    kingofsanda, Jul 24, 2008 IP
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    magnamatt is right, you really need space btw paragraphs.

    did you add posts in html format and didn't put <p> tags for each para? Looks like that might be the problem. If you add posts in the non-html format blogger should put your para tags in automatically.

    I agree with kingofsanda that design is not professional, but I think it works. For stories of true love, I don't think you want anything too slick. I like the green text on cream.

    I do think you need to take blogger navbar off the top, and to de-ugly the right column. The ads on white background are jarring and it looks cluttery.

    Oh also I would suggest promoting this where women hang out. :)
     
    farley, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  5. jamuna

    jamuna Active Member

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    use better template
     
    jamuna, Jul 24, 2008 IP