Please review My blog

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  2. kittyluver

    kittyluver Notable Member

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    It looks fine, but the advertisement in the top left should be a bit smaller, in my opinion :)
     
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    You must change the template in blog , search in google for wordpress magazine themes you will find a lot !
     
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    Since you are here, let me lay it on you:
    First the colors are not good. If you want to give the impression of professionalism and authority, Halloween is not going to cut it. You can never go wrong with a well designed blog on a white background.
    Black backgrounds only work for certain kinds of blogs.

    Next. You have no header, no logo, yet you have a ton of wasted space at the top with nothing but a small search bar.

    Next: Waaayyy to many ads crammed above the fold. Looks desperate, spammy and not credible. The ad on the left is not sized properly and it's not styled to match the ads on the right.

    Next: I can tell you copied and pasted the last article (the first one seen) because the format is bad. You need to structure your text and paragraphs professionally. Line breaks in the middle of sentences makes you look uneducated.

    Next: You have no images which makes it look boring and like a chore to read because there is nothing to break up the text. You should also make use of other media to compliment your articles and niche like video. There are plenty of health videos and video series on You Tube.

    Next: the "Links" and "Linking" pages look horrible. I have no idea what they are supposed to do, but cramming yet another adsense block in there really isn't helping. Same with your "About" page. More ads doesn't mean more money...in your case it will mean just the opposite. No money.

    On a scale of 1-10 with 10 being the best. I have to give you a 3 and that's only because I think you spelled your name correctly.

    Sorry dude. I'm just looking at it the way a reader would see it and I have built a lot of crappy blogs over the years and I am just as hard on myself.
     
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    hmansfield, Jul 6, 2010 IP