Please Review My Blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by luckyv172, Mar 27, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hello,

    Can you please review my blog . I have started it some days back . Here is the link

    Shin Chan

    Please tell me how is the Design , Logo , Content etc .. How can i Improve it ??

    Thanks,
    Lucky
     
    luckyv172, Mar 27, 2010 IP
  2. Sxperm

    Sxperm Notable Member

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    #2
    Here is my reviews

    1. Overall layout and color combination is good.

    2. The logo is too small in my opinion. You may consider adjust its size a little bigger.

    3. What is your main concept? I was expecting your site is related to cartoon, but your site also have "Online Gaming" "Wallpaper Download". If your main concept is cartoon then you should focus on it. Otherwise your site will not be interested much by visitors.

    4. Four block at the right side (Advertise Here) should be removed or replaced with some image instead of left them like that. :)
     
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  3. luckyv172

    luckyv172 Peon

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    #3
    Thanks for your precious review . Well the logo was made to fit in that place . but ill try level best to fix that one .
    Yes my main concept was cartoon but i added cartoon games and cartoon wallpapers as those attract a lot of visitors .
    Oh ya . those block . ill add some images instead of those .
     
    luckyv172, Mar 28, 2010 IP
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    contents_writer Peon

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    #4
    very nice....
     
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    ashutoshdube Active Member

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    #5
    Its good; the counter at the bottom appears to be an error - though its is not.
     
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  6. luckyv172

    luckyv172 Peon

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    #6
    oh that is stat counter thing . will remove it . Thanks for the review .
     
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    #7
    I like the design and the logo. However it's not a niche I'm interested in, or know anything about so I cannot really judge the content. But from my limited perspective, I thoght it was good
     
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    johny2006 Peon

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    #8
    over all it is looking good ..but may be some color changes will give more effect to your graphics.
     
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  9. etc

    etc Well-Known Member

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    #9
    nice site. i can't believe you found a boy that looks like shinchan lol..
    unfortunately this cartoon was banned in my country for he's bad influence the the kids lol..

    but then your site is great. i don't see no ads, whats your plan? :D
     
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    #10
    very nice design but logo is too small... good luck bud!
     
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  11. luckyv172

    luckyv172 Peon

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    Haha . Thanks for the Review . Well I am planning to gain some good SEO ranking before i can start up with ads or something and ya shin chan is great lol . I wrote about the show getting banned also . sad thing .
     
    luckyv172, Mar 29, 2010 IP
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    cfc011 Greenhorn

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    #12
    Look good for me :cool:
     
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  13. lineupmoney

    lineupmoney Peon

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    #13
    Respected sir,

    Through your meda voice, I need to tell you a heart shacking story just happened 29-03-2010 at 10.00 PM at Patrolling Check Post Wahgerian (Bata Pur) PHP Lahore Region.

    Asi Tariq Toor appointed at Wahgerian Patrolling Check Post was very sick today due to a small tuber behind left ear on
    his neck which he operated it and removed at Ghurki Hospital Operation Theater. (Record Available)

    DSP Nfasat Ali Khaan (Johar Town PHP Office) visited the post at 10 pm and very badly behaved with Asi Tariq Toor who was already sick due to his operation and even then the said Asi was Present on his duty in uniform when DSP Nfasat Ali Khaan tortured his and absued him a lot.

    On this humiliation the said Asi just remained silent and all staff was astonished on DSP's such behavior but nobody could stop DSP as he was senior officer.

    DSP Nfasat Ali Khaan raised the objection that why Asi went to hospital for small and minor surgery operation. He accused Asi to be guilty for disobey his seniors while Poor Asi has already informed the DSP on his mobile phone number ; 03009443666.

    and DSP intentionally droped the call all the time when Asi called his then poor Asi sent few SMS to inform DSP, on reading SMS he relayed a wireless message that said Asi is considered absent from his duty while Tariq Toor Asi wrote his report in daily log Book (Rooz Namcha) for his operation details and information which he sent to DSP.

    Ignoring this all DSP Nfasat Ali Khaan Draged Asi Tariq Toor in the yard of check post and absued.

    Now this DSP is threating Tariq Toor Asi to make his special departmental report to focus on his promt dissmissal from service.

    Kindly put this info on your media as soon as possible so this durty DSP who is treating his subordinates like animals to keep away from Tariq Toor Asi.




    PHP Lahore region: Phone: 04235300412.

    Regards,

    Holly Fields.

    Human rights activist.
     
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  14. luckyv172

    luckyv172 Peon

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    #14
    thanks for the review .
     
    luckyv172, Mar 29, 2010 IP
  15. luckyv172

    luckyv172 Peon

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    #15
    ya that logo . actually the theme has given only that much place for placing the logo . and i am not good at CSS or something to edit it . Thanks .
     
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    #16
    Nice site Good man
     
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  17. luckyv172

    luckyv172 Peon

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    #17
    thank you for reviewing it !! Is everything nice ?
     
    luckyv172, Mar 31, 2010 IP
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    #18
    nice color combination, keep it up dud nice
     
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    luckyv172 Peon

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    #19
    thank you bro . The color was decided by my designer :D
     
    luckyv172, Apr 1, 2010 IP
  20. luckyv172

    luckyv172 Peon

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    #20
    Thanks for the review . What type of color changes ? You mean the Background or Text or Logo ?
     
    luckyv172, Apr 3, 2010 IP