Please review my blog

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    Tom__, Sep 20, 2008 IP
  2. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #2
    Your writing is not bad I only found 1 grammatical error in the
    second paragraph where you have: "clicking at some profiles"
    it should be clicking on some profiles, good luck with the blog.
     
    kingofsanda, Sep 20, 2008 IP
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    #3
    Fixed the small gramatical error :)
     
    Tom__, Sep 20, 2008 IP