This is a blog I started and I wish for people to give me their commentary on what they think of the writing. There's only a few postings but give it a read and please let me know what you think. It's rather a general blog so far with a self-improvement thing going along with it. http://dreaminnovation.wordpress.com/ Thanks!
you have need to seo of the blog so that the maximum traffic bring to your blog and the information of blog is interesting
Yeah, after I make the move from free blog to my new domain, I'll be adding more articles and trying some SEO technique, thank you for looking! :]
The content is great. Maybe for future posts focus on single categories (ie Classical for example) and write on that?
You could increase your font size a bit. I'm not a big fan of dark websites, but this particular template suits the theme of your blog well. Good job overall and good luck with the website.
Thank you for the compliments, I'll be adding more content once it's moved to the new domain I bought for it and have wordpress installed! I'll be focusing on more sub-categories after I produce more 'introductory' articles to each category. Then after that I'll be delving into more specific categories, and thank you for your suggestions, I'll take em all to heart and mind.
all you need is content! do i must say, i shouldn't have scrolled down your post because i saw the ending of toy story 3, though i didn't play it, but got the idea. and i haven't watched that movie yet!!!!!! anyways, more content and add images to posts that are too long so it won't be that boring, then larger font, font color-why don't you just use white since the background color is black to make it more readable.
Sorry darkrider919 D: haha, if you haven't seen it yet, I promise you, it's probably going to be one of your favorites. I'm sure you've heard from some friends of how good it is since its been out for two weeks, afterall the first thing I heard was that people cried! From that I guess I could only assume what the sad points had to be focused on, but maybe that was just me. Thank you for the critiques! I will be sure to add more images to some of the posts, but the font size and color seem to come with the template I chose since I'm using a free wordpress blog. I plan to get someone to install wordpress for me by finding someone on fiverr.com. I already have someone picked out and plan to contact him tomorrow about it so if I show him this thread with all the positive comments, he might keep the template here and just help me change the font color and size, which you and someone else also mentioned I should change as well. Thanks again, compliments are good, but I value critiques even more. While my writing might be good, I wouldn't say 'professional' yet, but thank you SmartWEBmaster! It was only this year that I discovered my writing voice and found that I could communicate quite naturally. It was rather a profound shock that I could even write as well as I am now, but I know, like for anything, I have a long way to go before I am successful, and even then, I'm not sure my appetite would be satisfied. Thank you seofast, but the design was simply hand picked by me, not created . I'll take it as a compliment toward my taste of style though. Also; I recently posted up a new post for today. I might add some pictures here and there like darkrider919 recommended tonight, but that's iffy since I might just do it tomorrow, a little tired haha. Keep the comments coming, I always look forward to feedback, it's both a motivational boost and lesson learnt.
It's been uploaded to the new site. The person I hired to do it put a theme, but I was wondering what you guys thought of it in comparison to the free wordpress one I have up. http://www.dreaminnovation.com/ Hmm...