Please review my blog, Hykra.com

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Trojanfan, Jun 2, 2008.

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    Hykra.com is the site

    It is currently being used as a blog/portfolio for past work (still being constantly added to, have a lot to upload)

    Just wondering on your thoughts
     
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  2. kellyifrah

    kellyifrah Guest

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    looks good, i like the template
     
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    The site looks nice, the black and white theme looks great and it's easy to navigate, good job.
     
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  4. locomotion

    locomotion Well-Known Member

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    In your template(header) file (not settings), change your <title>hykra.com</title> to <title>Hykra - The masterful collection of a passionate writer</title>, it will help SEO :D
     
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    #5
    pretty nice layout but the header could use a little work.
     
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    sub7 Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Nice design and layout but the blog has no soul, the stories are too random and disorganised.
     
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  7. Trojanfan

    Trojanfan Active Member

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    Thanks locomotion

    JesseE, I know, I'm not a designer though. I need to find some help. that's definitely on my priority list

    sub7, it WILL be used as a blog in the future. right now I am in the process of actively uploading past work. It's currently a portfolio for my writing work for the most part. That is why it appears disorganized. I plan on using it as a blog when I am finished uploading my portfolio. I should have pointed that out earlier, that is my fault
     
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    I like the picture across the top, although I think Hykra could be larger and "The Collection of a Passionate Writer" should be black instead of white. Also, the gray "posted in" boxes draw attention to them, whereas I think it would look better to have the titles of your entries more outstanding, if that makes sense. Other than that, I like it.
     
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    templatesden Banned

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    #9
    Very nice and sexy black look, its good looking but you can make rollover button as active button when you are in the individual pages.
     
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  10. Trojanfan

    Trojanfan Active Member

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    trailtrekker, I've definitely been considering changing the color of the font. It's a bit hard to read right there. I do agree with you that the posted in boxes draw too much attention given how little meaning they really have. I'll take a look at that
     
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  11. Brandon Sheley

    Brandon Sheley Illustrious Member

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    Looks good, might add a little space under the text, just a tad
     
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  12. Trojanfan

    Trojanfan Active Member

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    under which text? Are you referring to the first paragraph of the actual articles? If so, those are within <div> tags due to the img, and I'm not sure how to fix those
     
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    Trojanfan Active Member

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    loco, I managed to fix it. I think it looks much cleaner and easier to read now
     
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  14. Trojanfan

    Trojanfan Active Member

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    Alright, I did a lot of touching up and fixed most of the things that have been recommended. Any further thoughts?
     
    Trojanfan, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    #15
    looks clean and easy to navigate, since it's a blog focused on text, it's pretty easy to read it, colors are ok.
    so i can say good work :)
     
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    #16
    Personally, not a fan of the black background
     
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  17. Trojanfan

    Trojanfan Active Member

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    haha, but it's part of the site, matches the look. not much I can do about that
     
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    locomotion Well-Known Member

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    In the description (header), what's the "//" thing used for? :D
     
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    It's just for looks. Doesn't really "do" anything. But it clearly distinguishes the subtitle in a unique way
     
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    #20
    The template looks ok, but the header text, "The Collection of a Passionate Writer" doesn't really reflect the content. I was expecting essay's or short stories. You may want to specify the niche you are writing about.

    Also, the posts on the home page cut off, and do not have a "read full article" link. The visitor has to click on the title, which isn't intuitive for everyone.
     
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