Please Review My Blog About Game Console Review

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    fitriulina, Jun 23, 2007 IP
  2. anthonyn

    anthonyn Well-Known Member

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    I feel you have to work on the english part of the content on your website.Certain sentences are not framed rightly.Also, you could add a colorful background for your webpage.
     
    anthonyn, Jun 23, 2007 IP
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    The design seems pretty plain and the bottom (footer) is very blue... not very eye catching or attractive..
     
    unknownkind, Jun 23, 2007 IP
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    Hi, i have visited your site. It's looks great. I love to play that game.
    I have also new website www.tri-travel.co.nr. I am trying to improve my web. Do you have a suggestion for me. Thanks
     
    tribdyn, Jun 29, 2007 IP
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    Color and layout of site is great. Maybe a colorful background like suggested before, but something light and transparent - so that the game related stuff is still the brightest colors.

    The English is a bit choppy - maybe someone could look over it/help you edit it for ease in reading?

    Great job!
     
    ClydeSatchell, Aug 8, 2007 IP