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PLease review my basic websites

Discussion in 'Websites' started by peter_anderson, Dec 1, 2007.

  1. #1
    hi, i built these on freewebs, as a way to try and get these kind of sites at school without using a proxy [will get expelled] they are VERY basic, but can you please review them. the games site will be getting a new look soon,

    www.webgames4u.page.tl
    www.excuses.co.nr
    www.coolvideos.co.nr

    constructive critisim :)
     
    peter_anderson, Dec 1, 2007 IP
  2. werty04

    werty04 Well-Known Member

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    #2
    Very basic. Comic sans font on the first looks like your page is made by a kiddo.

    Also the colors are too contrasting that can be seem to irritating to the eyes.
     
    werty04, Dec 1, 2007 IP
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    mjmorrell Peon

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    #3
    Layout is not that attractive... Free sub-domains are pretty meh
     
    mjmorrell, Dec 1, 2007 IP
  4. peter_anderson

    peter_anderson Notable Member

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    well considering they are made so that you can play games at school without using a proxy, i think i did them alright. what is the point on making it flashy when its for playing at school?
     
    peter_anderson, Dec 2, 2007 IP
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    aukyo Active Member

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    #5
    Add some color. Make the images blend...archive some content. Maybe you could use a CMS.
     
    aukyo, Dec 2, 2007 IP
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    myukhosting Peon

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    #6
    looks basic but i guess it'll do the job just fine :)
     
    myukhosting, Dec 3, 2007 IP
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    ttoledan Peon

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    #7
    I think it looks very neat and professional. Not cluttered. I don't like busy sites anyway.
     
    ttoledan, Dec 3, 2007 IP
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    linuxgod Peon

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    They're okay, but some of the colors are quite irritable to the eyes.
     
    linuxgod, Dec 7, 2007 IP
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    dsnj Peon

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    Yes, quite basic and template looking, but somewhat usable.
     
    dsnj, Dec 7, 2007 IP
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    limburatorul Peon

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    #10
    yeah, basic design, use some dhtml, java menus to put some collor on your pages, or a flash menu, there are tons of programs you can use to design the buttons, and you might consider changing the colors too...
     
    limburatorul, Dec 8, 2007 IP
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    agree Active Member

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    Ok. i just loved the websites!
     
    agree, Dec 10, 2007 IP
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    zorah Well-Known Member

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    #12
    Improve the colors
     
    zorah, Dec 11, 2007 IP
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    peter_anderson Notable Member

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    #13
    in the procces of giving the games site a complete makeover.

    will be open soon!
     
    peter_anderson, Dec 11, 2007 IP
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    swedal Notable Member

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    Two of the three sites are coming up with a blank screen for me - the top and bottom sites
     
    swedal, Dec 11, 2007 IP
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    peter_anderson Notable Member

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    they do that sometimes. dont know why.
     
    peter_anderson, Dec 12, 2007 IP