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Discussion in 'Design' started by admans, Sep 26, 2005.

  1. #1
    Hey people..im not a professional at doing designs...but m passionate about it.
    SEMrush
    I have a mobile related site and i wanted a banner for it. Well with my tiny little knowledge of Adobe i have designed a banner for my site.

    Please review it and suggest the rectifications if ne needed to make it more cooler...same banner is gonna be used for advertising also...

    Banner: [​IMG]
    Logo : [​IMG]
    Size : 134kb [is it big in size?!]


    Thanx.

    Admans.
    www.mobile-addict.com
    www.a1hosts.info
     
    admans, Sep 26, 2005 IP
    SEMrush
  2. DomainLoot

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    i like the banner.

    it's catchy.

    the line thru the M & A in the logo, i'm not so sure about - for me anyway.

    good luck,
     
    DomainLoot, Sep 26, 2005 IP
  3. admans

    admans Peon

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    thanx...ill make changes to it..ne more reviews?

    Btw..is the size of banner ok or it should be lil less : 134kb
     
    admans, Sep 26, 2005 IP
  4. elkiwi

    elkiwi Active Member

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    #4
    134kb is definately too big ...imagine that a slow loading page is considered to be > 60kb ...many people esp those on 56 modems would never see you banner load and the rest probably gone before it did.

    I think a banner should be at most <edit>30k</edit>...try optimizing a bit more by using less colours in the pallet if it's a gif.
     
    elkiwi, Sep 26, 2005 IP
  5. admans

    admans Peon

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    Thanx for the advice..ill try to make it more less..definitely!
     
    admans, Sep 26, 2005 IP
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    corena Peon

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    #6
    the banner disappeared. bummer I always get places late
     
    corena, Sep 28, 2005 IP
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    #7
    i like it too but not the line through the 2 letters

    serge
     
    smbotans, Sep 28, 2005 IP
  8. angelfire

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    #8
    I like the banner design very catchy and appropriate.
    Good luck...:)
     
    angelfire, Sep 29, 2005 IP
  9. ccisystems

    ccisystems Peon

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    #9
    If I may, I think I am too late, but here's my two cents:

    1. Colors are kind of faded. No contrast scheme. Not very catchy, colors are cold.

    2. The logo, if that's the company logo, then ok, but looked to me first like some sort of "secred organization logo", you know, triangles, etc.

    3. Size is definitely a problem. A banner at this dimension should not exceed 15 kb.

    4. The font looks like a Halloween decoration, with the pointy serifs...

    Did you do all the animation in Photoshop?
     
    ccisystems, Sep 30, 2005 IP
  10. discoverclips

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    #10
    The colors look nice I think, the logo is professional.Like ccisystems said; the font reminds me of Halloween.

    Nice banner :)
     
    discoverclips, Oct 1, 2005 IP
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    Okay, I'm going to get bad rep for this, but I believe in been honest. I think both the banner and logo look unprofessional, if you want to portray the right image to people then I would always recommend employing a graphic designer to do the work professionally - for one the banner or logo is probably one of the first things they will see, and you want a banner and logo which is going to stand out, so that when people see the image they know who you are instantly.

    Look at the logos that corporate companies use, nike, adidas, etc you don't need to have any text to describe the company, you know who they are straight away.

    Neither the banner or logo portray a mobile phone website.

    My two pence worth.
     
    DarrenC, Oct 1, 2005 IP
  12. hey

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    I think you should take the onsite logo and use it for your banners etc. it looks much cooler.
     
    hey, Oct 2, 2005 IP
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    #13
    the font in the flash in my op does not match the coolness affect of the banner, overall it looks great, I would use a diff font though..
     
    MiamiHost, Oct 4, 2005 IP
  14. clasione

    clasione Well-Known Member

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    #14
    I like it, not bad at all.... ;)
     
    clasione, Oct 4, 2005 IP
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    #15
    nice banner;)
     
    "srkn", Oct 5, 2005 IP
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    Thanx all for your honest opinions.
     
    admans, Oct 5, 2005 IP
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    its good but not really "great" sorry :p
     
    dbtech, Oct 6, 2005 IP
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    #18
    heres My Votes:

    1. Size - Abit to big, Lowering it down will make it easier to handle and more viewers.

    2.Writting - the font is not very professional if you ask me.

    3. Colours - The logo should be the same as the banner colours also lighten up the Text.

    4.Text Size - Resizing the text down abit will make it more readable.

    Thats All
    hope it turns out how you want it.

    Gamezmania Designs
     
    Gamezmania, Oct 9, 2005 IP
  19. octalsystems

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    #19
    verry good banner and verry good font choose u
     
    octalsystems, May 19, 2009 IP
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    #20
    i like the logo but fonts used in banner are bid odd for me.. i feel that fonts are irreverent
     
    ajeyreddy, Nov 21, 2011 IP