Please review my aStore!

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    bass, Jul 22, 2008 IP
  2. leeluo

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    PowerShot Digital
    I think you have a lot of white space. Maybe giving your header a little more detail. Also I click on the first camera, the SD750 and get an error page, and some of the others sometimes, not sure why.
    JVC Everio Camcorder
    This one looks good, simple. But again I think there is a lot of white space.
     
    leeluo, Jul 22, 2008 IP
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    Looks like both sites have too much white space.

    JVC Site
    The red font on green background is hard to read. A different color scheme might look better.

    Powershot Site
    Like the color scheme and everything is easy to read. Looks like something funny is happening with the descriptions below the photos of the cameras, but other than that the site is really nice.
     
    leronford, Jul 22, 2008 IP
  4. Smith Brown

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    you are working with a very simple site with a lot plain area.

    I think you should reduce the white space. Add a sofisticated logo to your header. Links are not working well, and some of the others sometimes, not sure why.

    you are add simple templates to pop up or zoom the photo when the cursor is on it.
     
    Smith Brown, Jul 22, 2008 IP