Here is the link: http://pinoguin.com/pnews/article/w....html?tx_ttnews[backPid]=101&cHash=c26927fa97 Tell me what you think I'm open for comments, suggestions or any violent reactions.
The article is good. But since your intention is to have more ppl try ubuntu include a few screenshots of ubuntu with rotating cubes and other compiz fusion effects. Also the visitors will have an idea that "hey linux aint too different from windows". Hope you get my point. ARonald
That's a good idea, maybe throw in a few youtube videos. Does anyone think the article is too wordy? or can get a bit boring because of it's length?
I like the general theme to the article. - Not to nitpick at all the grammar, but in the first paragraph it should be "its" not "it's" - I just think that mistake in the first paragraph could be a turn off. - as soon as you say "'America's Most wanted Christmas Gift'" - I think Wii because of all the media attention it's getting. Just throwing that out there. - you could bold the intro questions to your paragraphs ("What if I encounter a problem?", etc.)