I just created a new affiliate landing page. The link is in my signature. Please let me know what you think of it. Are there any changes that you would suggest?
Hey mate! I have a me feedback, in footer you haven't changed the copyright, I suggest changing that The site loads very fast, but looks a bit, "old fasion". The site content looks nice and is easy to read, that's about all.
The top half of the page (above the fold) looks nice, uncluttered and clean With the bottom half I would suggest breaking the text down into smaller paragraphs because it just makes it easier to read. The paragraphs look a bit "chunky" at the moment
When it comes to Landing Pages I always like to refer back to the highest converting ones you see on Affiliate sites. Here's the 2nd highest one sorted by gravity on Clickbank. http://tubelaunch.com/ You have a video already, I would say make it even bigger and more prominent at the top. Then trim down and refine your text content. That's the thing that I always notice about great performing Landing Pages. The font is just ridiculously large. But it also makes it so easy to read. And if the copy is good it will grab you. As of right now the paragraphs just kind of meld together and people will get distracted and click away. Always copy from the top performers. Make it easy on yourself!
If you want to get people interested in earning money, you should make a video on another location, get a suit and stand up when you talk. A rich man can sell anything because with one look you see that they are succesfull and you want it to.
Completely agree with Michelle the page and more importantly the information needs to be 'scannable' by the eye to be able to take in the key messages.