Please review my 2 newest sites

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  2. ejones222

    ejones222 Member

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    I think both are great sites but the Truck site need some products in the front like the baby site instead of the blog. If I'm shopping I want to see products first. Just human nature I guess.
     
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    Looks pretty good to me

    The bedding site looks better
     
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    Thanks. I'll change that around if I remember how. lol I figured google might like content first?
     
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    Woot! I did it! I changed it up. I guess I should write something for the front page though, huh?
     
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    not bad, i would suggest tho that with your baby site that you remove the "buy now" buttons from the front page, people would prefer to click "detailed information" / "more information" and then have a "buy now" button in there, i know from past experiments that it does in fact convert better when set up like i mentioned above.

    Your sites are clean tho you should do well, best of luck
     
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    Yep, That rocks....great job!
     
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    Very helpful! Thanks..I'll do that.
    Thanks for the kudos ejones. :D
     
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    On the racing truck site there's a small google ad and a bunch of white space to the right of it. I'd switch that to one of the square ads to better fill the void. I'd also adjust the word-wrap on the product descriptions on the front page so that the words all stay to the right of the pictures. When it wraps only one or two words below the picture, it looks funny.
     
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    Gotcha! Thank you. I'll do that. I've been working more on this all day and have come up with some issues with the pages showing up with the header. Please don't hate on me for that. lol I'm working on it.
     
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    The ads look much better. Maybe move the hubgarage ad to the bottom. I'm not sure about the unlabeled pics at the top. First, without labels I don't know what I'll be taken to if I click on one. Second, notice how the edges are jagged? That's because the actual images are huge (right click and view image to see), and HTML does a really poor job resizing images. Use a program like photoshop to resize the images properly, and they'll have smooth lines and look like they're supposed to. This will also make your page load a lot faster. Doubleplusgood!

    The items for sale look a lot better, but I'd like to read more description in the teaser before having to click "read more."
     
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