Please review my 10 min. old site.

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by karang, Jan 7, 2009.

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    karang, Jan 7, 2009 IP
  2. Jackie_W

    Jackie_W Well-Known Member

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    #2
    its just a turnkey site really no original content at all...
     
    Jackie_W, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    Forum Poster Peon

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    Simple looking single page site. But I think the design is appropiate for this type of site. Wish you all the best.
     
    Forum Poster, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    I usually hit the back button whenever I see such a site, as for the design I think
    you should reduce the size of the font in the body of the page it's too large, good
    luck with the site.
     
    kingofsanda, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    #5
    To be blunt, it looks like a spam site.

    • Start by changing your font to something a bit more web friendly and easier to read. I prefer Verdana over the others.
    • Some paragraphs are centered, some are not.
    • Why is everything bold?
    • If the site is 10 minutes old, update the footer to reflect that it's been recently updated. I know I wouldn't by something from a site that hasn't been updated in 4 or 5 years.
     
    steelfrog, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    chloecash Peon

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    #6
    It is a nice landing page....but not really a site...
     
    chloecash, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    colombian7878 Peon

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    #7
    yes, this is a simple landing page, add contact & Simple Faq page. it will boost your sales !
     
    colombian7878, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    mickg Peon

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    got to agree with all the other posts, it does not offer any unique and looks like every other landing page whats nearly half a mile long
     
    mickg, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    #9
    I would susggest:
    1) Add a fav icon
    2) Create a good appealing logo
    3) Redesign/use a good template and colour combination
    4) In your footer add copyright(correct date i.e 2009) , terms of service etc

    Best of luck with the site!

    Kind Regards
     
    mrhrk01, Jan 10, 2009 IP