Please Review - Launching Feb 4th Need Feedback

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by mikeb209, Jan 18, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi

    Michael Anthony here, I'm launching an amazing system on Feb 4th. I need all the input and critique you can throw at me before launch day.

    This is my 80% complete salespage. I'm going to add videos and proof shortly.

    guaranteedcashformula.com/main1.html

    you can view my jv page here:

    guaranteedcashformula.com/jv.html


    Thanks
     
    mikeb209, Jan 18, 2010 IP
  2. dawack

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    Personally, I dislike the layout of such websites like yours. You are not using enough horizontal space, even though the majority of PC users now have widescreen monitors.

    I know it is more difficult to design a widescreen version, but if you get it right, it will help to differentiate your site from the hundreds similiar ones out there where you have to scroll 10+ pages to the bottom, and which utilize only 1/2 of the available horizontal width.
     
    dawack, Jan 18, 2010 IP
  3. mikeb209

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    Thanks for the input. I'm more concerned with sales copy and the offer. I'm content with the layout for now.

    Thanks
     
    mikeb209, Jan 18, 2010 IP
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    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    Your sales page was quite interesting and has amazing products..
     
    netdriver788, Jan 19, 2010 IP