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Discussion in 'Websites' started by Razvan Pop, Jun 8, 2004.

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    Hello.

    http://www.seoed.com/

    Please take a look at my site and tell me what you think. :)
    I look forward for your feedback. Site in 90% finished.
     
    Razvan Pop, Jun 8, 2004 IP
  2. ViciousSummer

    ViciousSummer Ayn Rand for President! Staff

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    Looks good! :)

    The layout is clean and easily navigatable. The only thing I would add is a graphic in the upper right corner, to break up the 100% text a bit. Also, I think your catch phrase ("Boldly walk into tomorrow with a purpose and a vision for a better world") is too long. I think "Boldly walk into tomorrow with a purpose" OR "Boldly walk into tomorrow with a vision for a better world, would flow better.

    Hope that helps and good luck!
     
    ViciousSummer, Jun 9, 2004 IP
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    Help Desk Well-Known Member

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    The buttons are too small. It would be more ideal if they were more like the menu links you see on this forum.
     
    Help Desk, Jun 10, 2004 IP
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    rfuess Guest

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    #4
    Perhaps bold text in the buttons would help?

    Robert Fuess
    Spiderweb Logic
     
    rfuess, Jun 14, 2004 IP
  5. Geir

    Geir Berserker

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    I like the simple design and color theme.
    I agree that it might be better if you make the menu buttons slightly larger, and if you shorten the catch-phrase.

    :) Geir
     
    Geir, Jun 14, 2004 IP
  6. Nitin M

    Nitin M White/Gray/Black Hat

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    #6
    Clean & Simple - I like it.

    A few subtle grammar and punctuation corrections I noticed on the homepage:

    >> We offer three SEO packages to choose from:

    You do not then provide the list and so this should not end in a colon. It is a sentence and so it can't end with the word "from". This would be correct grammar:

    We offer three SEO packages from which to choose.

    >> Therefore we do not engage in any search engine spamming such as doorway pages, or automatic javascript redirection for example.

    I believe it would be correct if written this way:

    Therefore, we do not engage in any search engine spamming such as doorway pages or automatic javascript redirection, for example.

    Obviously, I didn't have a lot to pick on if I'm editing grammar and punctuation! Nice Job.
     
    Nitin M, Jun 19, 2004 IP
  7. Razvan Pop

    Razvan Pop Member

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    Thanks a lot. My English is not that good. :)
     
    Razvan Pop, Jun 20, 2004 IP
  8. Razvan Pop

    Razvan Pop Member

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    #8
    After a month i decided that the layout is not good for business.
    I've changed the design. Tell me what you think.
    www.seoed.com
     
    Razvan Pop, Jun 30, 2004 IP
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    ewayne Guest

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    1. On your contact page I would make the additional info form larger, and indicate to people some of the additional information you would like them to give you. This would allow you and your prospects to be more prepared when your talk to them on the phone.

    2. On your 'the company' page, change '100 p ercent' to '100 percent'.

    3. I love your tag line 'not placement, conversion', but you don't talk about conversion much in your site. As a prospect I would like to see the concepts mentioned in your tag line talked about.
     
    ewayne, Jul 1, 2004 IP
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    mddv Well-Known Member

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    Nice proffessional look on your site and it looks clean.
    design it you self?
     
    mddv, Jul 5, 2004 IP
  11. Razvan Pop

    Razvan Pop Member

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    Yes, i do all the design and coding part. Not the best part. :)
     
    Razvan Pop, Jul 5, 2004 IP
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    nohaber Well-Known Member

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    razvan,
    great design. That's exactly the kind of design that I like. Simple and clean.
     
    nohaber, Jul 19, 2004 IP
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    melfan Peon

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    its simple and clean. you might want to add some footer for more contents.
     
    melfan, Jul 21, 2004 IP
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    peter Guest

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    #14
    The dsign of the layout is not bad.. simple and neat.. but I would suggest you to use a darker orange color. Thanks
     
    peter, Jul 24, 2004 IP