Please Review ComputerBuddy.org

Discussion in 'Websites' started by amxcorey, Feb 5, 2008.

  1. #1
    Someon please take a look at my website HERE

    There are three main parts. the front end site with its own features - the forum - and directory in a little while i will be making some minor adjustments to it but i want your opinion

    I worked really hard to make it what it is and i hope to continue to expand. I used to have a lot of visitors but im starting to loose them and i don't know what to do. i have some great seo tools sponsored by iwebtool. i really need to change the content part of the hompage it is dull and many people are gettting turned away.

    Anyway let me know your thoughts

    Thanks
    Amxcorey
     
    amxcorey, Feb 5, 2008 IP
  2. amxcorey

    amxcorey Peon

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    no thoughts at all? there has to be something to say about it?
     
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  3. JimmyJam

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    First off, don't come across like this:
    Our Company - ComputerBuddy is a company dedicated to helping you move forward on the internet. We offer several free to use search engine optimization tools in order to help you better promote your website.

    Instead use a benefit factor:
    Need To Promote Your Site, FREE Seo tools that will Double even Triple your site's exposure!

    That's just my two cents.. hope you see the direction I was going.

    To your success,

    James Delong
     
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    yea i understand they sound catchy and they get at what minute deatails of what the customer is looking for.
     
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    Ok. First rule of the internet.
    Make clear to "EU's" what your site is about before they lose interest.
    You need to wipe your slate clean and start fresh (as in, remove all extra linkage in the site description).
    You need to make every important thing that your site is about, stand out like a sore thumb (but prettier).
    Get off of the generic train and kill the Bookmark stuff. People don't bookmark things they get bored with; unless they are paid to do so.
    I could ramble on but fix those first if you want a more successful site.
     
    nuclearwerewolf, Feb 5, 2008 IP