Hello. I was wondering if anyone would review an article I had written by someone and tell me what you think about it. Follow the make money with adsense link in my signature. Thanks
I'll give it a shot... It was very hard for me to read past the first paragraph because: **the punctuation is bad **the grammar is bad **run on sentences **writer should have used it's (a pet peeve of mine) I am not an English major or a teacher, but reading stuff like this gives me a headache. Sorry, Tam