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Discussion in 'Websites' started by spellsre, Mar 3, 2006.

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    give some ideas and if you can tune up or redesign my website :
    pm budget...
    I am really bad designing and dont have time

    http://www.ahintofseduction.com

    thank u
     
    spellsre, Mar 3, 2006 IP
  2. Sims2

    Sims2 Active Member

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    I quite like it. The domain is abit weird I must say though!
     
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  3. Zoned

    Zoned Peon

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    Nice site, well done,

    I got a couple of errors though when I clicked on the Welcome to the Town of Feeling poem and other links on the poetry page....:confused:

    regards,

    Zoned
     
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  4. ryan_uk

    ryan_uk Illustrious Member

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    The layout generally seems fine but I'd remove the keyword spam that's at the bottom of the page:

    Instead, write a short introductory text after the "Welcome to...". This will help with ad-targeting and won't put people off.
     
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  5. spellsre

    spellsre Guest

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    oh thank u.
    i thought nobody would like it lol
     
    spellsre, Mar 3, 2006 IP
  6. chachacallis

    chachacallis Well-Known Member

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    i think you need to change the fonts for the links, it looks ok but you need to change up the fonts you are using
     
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  7. RectangleMan

    RectangleMan Notable Member

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    I think you can tighten up that header some. I would cut some of that height off especially on the right. It's a pleasing layout though but it just seems rough. I would move your nav section into that header on the right side and do a box google ad under the heart maybe. At least play around with your elements to see if you can shorten the page. It scrolls too much imho and for no logical reason.
     
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  8. Mark Davies

    Mark Davies Well-Known Member

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    Nice looking site, I found the script kinda hard to read and distracting though!
    Good luck
    Regards;
    Mark
     
    Mark Davies, Mar 3, 2006 IP
  9. ryan_uk

    ryan_uk Illustrious Member

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    The "love letters" and "love tactics" links might make people feel tricked and annoyed. Directed away from your site and to advertising (without warning). Also, the "keyword spam" is still there. It's a good idea to remove it immediately because it's against adsense TOS, so be careful.
     
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  10. datarecall

    datarecall Peon

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    just checked it out the layout has some possibilities:
    1) change the font for the links on the left hard on the eyes
    2) the text: how to seduce men how to seduce women love attraction . spells for love , love spells . save marriage .... if your going to try and hide content atleast use css to do it right :) but google can usually tell that the font is small font size="2" so you will probbly get penalized for it so you might aswell get rid of it.
    3) maybe centre the whole page instead of having it to the left
    4) in your code you have :     &nbsp get rid off all those
    5) no h tags ie: <h1> <h2>
    6) your code wont validate as you have <strong> not closed never tried to validate it myself just by a glance

    just my humble suggestions but thats just what i would change... good ideas you will do great once you get some designing under your belt
     
    datarecall, Mar 4, 2006 IP