Please Review and need Opinions for my Freebie Site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by korki4, Oct 29, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi guys!
    I am pretty new at making websites and try my best to make my own graphics and putting it all together with the website ;)

    here is my site myfreebiecorner

    need opinions! and review

    thank you for checking my website!
     
    korki4, Oct 29, 2009 IP
  2. madox

    madox Well-Known Member

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    #2
    great blog it's very good work for someone new at making website ... keep creating
     
    madox, Oct 29, 2009 IP
  3. ablaye

    ablaye Well-Known Member

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    #3
    I like your theme. It's not very common. However, you need a better logo.
    You also need to create more content to your blog.
    It's not bad for a start. Good luck with the site.
     
    ablaye, Oct 29, 2009 IP
  4. v1ct0r93

    v1ct0r93 Peon

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    #4
    you need a better logo
     
    v1ct0r93, Oct 31, 2009 IP
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    [/root.] Well-Known Member

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    #5
    I like the domain name but design looks really unprofessional. Maybe you should go with a catalog/directory like layout?
     
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  6. DartLady

    DartLady Active Member

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    I like the background.

    My first impression of the text "Have you ever wanted one of these" is that it's too blurry - makes me wonder if I'm high and my eyes aren't focusing - except it's just plain old root beer I'm drinking!

    Lots of punctuation and grammatical errors. Please have someone proof and edit that for you. And remember, not everyone is "guys." Or are you targeting only a certain group of people?

    Your phrase to think about; suggest changing "am I ready" to "are you ready"
     
    DartLady, Oct 31, 2009 IP
  7. hrromrise

    hrromrise Peon

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    you work is excellent nice site
     
    hrromrise, Nov 1, 2009 IP