Please Review And Help Me

Discussion in 'Websites' started by gemblung, Feb 9, 2010.

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    gemblung, Feb 9, 2010 IP
  2. talvehtia

    talvehtia Well-Known Member

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    Well I know you just started but you need to fill it with content first. It's just a simple and clean looking blog right now and there isn't much stuff to say about it.
     
    talvehtia, Feb 9, 2010 IP
  3. BuildLinksPro

    BuildLinksPro Greenhorn

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    very clean and nice. good work!
     
    BuildLinksPro, Feb 9, 2010 IP
  4. forump

    forump Peon

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    if you said that you do it last night it is very cool for one night stand:p
     
    forump, Feb 9, 2010 IP
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    BadBoyzStudioZ Peon

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    The design is fine. Easy on the eyes, so that is good. You have so much out there to choose from as far as content. And you need it badly! That site will not hold a visitors attention... But, that may be a good thing.

    If you want people to "click-out" on your Google ads or whatever, then you have the perfect site for that. People build sites like this just for that reason. It depends on what you want to do.

    If you want to become an "authority" site about making money on the internet, then you will have to start assembling articles related to the subject. Just make sure that you make it easy to search out information. That means to keep your navigation simple and easy so that people really feel at home researching ideas.
     
    BadBoyzStudioZ, Feb 9, 2010 IP
  6. clarityofdiamonds

    clarityofdiamonds Peon

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    obviously you need content. Even more important is you need to improve your grammar. Nobody will read your blog if you keep writing the way you wrote the first article.
     
    clarityofdiamonds, Feb 9, 2010 IP
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    Almost no content at all, incredibly plain, boring layout. Basically it just looks like any other clone work at home site. I'd give you a D-
     
    mruppert, Feb 9, 2010 IP
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    faltoyano Peon

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    yes you need to improve your grammar, if you keep the way you create the articles than maybe you will getting visitor cmiiw
     
    faltoyano, Feb 10, 2010 IP
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    mchrest Active Member

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    Could use a little more useful content but design is good
     
    mchrest, Feb 10, 2010 IP
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    When there's more ads than content, somethings got to change.
     
    paul15, Feb 10, 2010 IP
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    LRay Peon

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    The design is fine, but your site need content.
     
    LRay, Feb 10, 2010 IP
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    Sunrise Associates Peon

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    Yes the site is fine but you do need to update it and everyday is best. You can use content from lots of places. I'm pretty new here but just ask if you need help getting content. The more you put stuff up - the more people will go back to the site.
     
    Sunrise Associates, Feb 10, 2010 IP
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    toni_online Peon

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    you have to post unique content regarding the topic of your blog
     
    toni_online, Feb 11, 2010 IP
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    tbh not impressive :(
     
    armt11, Feb 11, 2010 IP
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    deyounggerry Peon

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    I'm sorry but the grammar is bad and the ads overwhelming. You have one post poorly written. I find no redeeming value. Try again when you have more to offer a visitor.
     
    deyounggerry, Feb 11, 2010 IP