Please Review and Give Opinion about my Site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by rakhmanto, Oct 3, 2011.

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    Hi all DP member,&nbsp;<br><br>Please review my new site below and give your 'honest' opinion about it

    http://expendableslefilm.com/

    Many thanks in advance
     
    rakhmanto, Oct 3, 2011 IP
  2. browntwn

    browntwn Illustrious Member

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    It reads like nonsense. I would guess you spun other content and do not know English well enough to realize it no longer makes a lick of sense.

    Sorry it is bad news, but you asked for honest opinion.

     
    browntwn, Oct 3, 2011 IP
  3. rakhmanto

    rakhmanto Peon

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    #3
    thanks for ur honest opinion :)
     
    rakhmanto, Oct 3, 2011 IP
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    jlane771 Peon

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    Yes I agree with above poster you need to improve your grammar and maybe tidy up the layout (e.g. centralise the content in the middle of the page)
     
    jlane771, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  5. rakhmanto

    rakhmanto Peon

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    thank you very much :)
     
    rakhmanto, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  6. hashif

    hashif Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Nice website. You can improve your website by placing content on the left, and navigation on the right side..My suggestion:Blue text on a white background can be a good idea..:)
     
    hashif, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  7. rakhmanto

    rakhmanto Peon

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    thanks so much for your review and suggestion :)
     
    rakhmanto, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  8. polinas

    polinas Member

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    #8
    Nise desighn. Ilike it.
     
    polinas, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  9. yagnesh_shenoy

    yagnesh_shenoy Greenhorn

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    #9
    the website is have nice layout but i dont know about the content , the header image is also kinda disturbing or irritating to the eye
     
    yagnesh_shenoy, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  10. jaan123

    jaan123 Peon

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    good site, articles could be more informative
     
    jaan123, Oct 4, 2011 IP